Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

Rain...

By the cliff, along the shore
I watch the waves that shows memories of you more
I ask myself why I left you alone
Is this my destiny tells that I should live and die alone!

The wind blews and passed through me
Like I said goodbye and doesn't respond to me
Your tears fell and slaps me in the face
Can't take what I've said and leaves me in this place

As I go down to go to shore
I saw a stone that is flat and strong
And I throw it up in the weak waves,
As the stone goes deep down the sea, the alarm was turned on
I ran through the base to see what's going on
Until I noticed that the attacked began in the place where she lives
So I go there and hopes that you are fine

The rain falls when I go inside the war...
Every men that I kill is not enough to see you my dear
And every people that dies is the reason for them to pay for their cries
Every explosion that I pass the more reason that I shouldn't die
To live forever with you ti'll I die...

Finally, I came to your house
It's not yet destroyed and I hope your safe there inside
But one thing destroys all my hopes
The house explodes to itself in front of me...
I feel so sad that this thing happened to me...
I blame myself for what I've done
I left you alone and can't protect you from anyone
That's not the reason you are gone!
If only I'd stay this will not happen...
I also want to die, i don't want to see tomorrow
Without the warmth of your arms that takes the sorrow

I hear your voice calling my name
like im in heaven, dreaming with my shame
I hear again your voice one more time
I open my eyes, turns back at the same time
Your in front of me with those tears flowing into your face slowly
Run towards me and hug me tightly
Promise I'll never say goodbye to you again forever
And the rain suddenly stops and the war is over...
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Rain... [2]

We thought the war was finally over
But the seek for blood and death are searching for donors
Soldiers like robots that don't have emotions
Kills all the people without thinking any opinions
Howling their lives for them to survive
Everyone of them looks like they are in full berserk
The same with a small spark that explodes in the dark

Now they are all herte at my sight
Didn't noticed my calculations were right
Surrounding us, cornered in one side
Only thinking of you in my mind

One shot hits me with a pain
My body fell and it started to rain
I can't think positive because of you I cannot save
The second shot emerges and I think it was my death
But one thing strucks my head and it was you being dead
Open my eyes and I see you blocked the second shot
Sacrifice yourself for me and saved me from my death
Like an angel from a light
That gives me strength how to fight
I quickly catch you when you fall
Get my gun and kill them all
Howling for your life wish you hear me call

I ran you to the nearest hospital
Take care of you from the doctors giving all my trust to them out of myself
Leaving you there lying in your bed, sleeping until you are awake
Promised myself to leave you `cause even I can't protect myself
Thinks that I'm not the right one for you and leave you once and for all

It's been a long time since this rain doesn't stop falling
Like the pain that's nside in my heart that is continously flowing
So I go every place that I know you would like to go
But there is no sign of you and adds to this rain
That gives me sorrow...
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Rain... [3]

I think of the days when your still here
Your always there for me to cheer me up when I'm feeling blue
That realizes me I should not take things personally
But now your gone, because of what I've done
The day when the blue skies turns to gray

Every war that I won, there's this rain that joins me on
Sometimes I'm used to it, `cause I think I understand all what I've done
Sit from the statue that appears like a devil
It's still raining like it was neverending
I lie down in a open field to watch the stars
But the rainclouds blocks the way upon your wishing star
I forgot there was the rain that reminds me you are gone

Smiled and mesmerized the memories of your past
Everytime I gaze at you, you always replenishes my soul
You pump my heart with your hand, and if you stop I am done
I promise you I'll never leave you and protect you with my life
I'm always there for you to catch you when you fall
But I guess I will never be there to catch you anymore

I look at a place in the park we always go
See someone in a umbrella, wonder who I saw
She turned around and she looks like you, no it's really you
You also see me and runs towards me
Hug me tightly and cried deeply
Now I realized the feeling of being hurt and left behind
I'm wrong for what I've done, and caused me to be dark
The rain stops, a shine comes out and ray at us
We're both happy, so the sign the sunrise shows which makes a rainbow upon us...
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Evil in me...

I walk with the storm together with the sorrow
That gives me strength to face tomorrow
I see your face just like your mother
And walks away thinks it doesn't matter

Quite afar, I fell and hard to breathe
Why is this happening, I hear my heart beat
I feel I'm crushed like I do in my chest
I kneel in my knees and smiles at my best

I guess its the right time the evil will be unleashed
From inside that I didn't noticed
The evil spirit binds at my neck
Through my body and to my head

I morph in a blink of an eye
Have my wings that suits me to fly
Sold my soul to the evil that takes me forever till I die
Fly away with fallen feathers and takes me in the sky...
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Slave...

Even I don't tell you,
Your important to me
Even I don't think of you,
When I'm asleep your in my dream

Even I'm look like a jerk
Wish you could hear
The scream of my feelings

I'm your slave even you don't notice
I swear to you sometimes I'm just ignoring you
Wish you could hear
In your hug I'm eager with

I won't seek for another girl
In you I will be satisfied
Whatever you say to me
Trust that I will obey

Almost everytime
Were like cats and dogs dear
In your arms I'm happy

I'm your slave even you don't notice
I swear to you sometimes I just ignore you
Wish you could hear
In your hug I'm eager with

Forced to catch the stars
Just to stay with me

I'm your slave even you don't notice
I swear to you sometimes I just ignore you
Wish you could hear
In your hug I'm eager with

Because your the only one that I want to sit with
Whether its cold or hot the night is
I just want you to know
Your the only one that I will love...

I've read them all before and I was impressed ^_^
It's more of a story rather than a poem though, still it's really touching
Some phrases are long...and it'll sound better if it was shorten somhow. All it in all, great work :2thumbs:

They are all so wonderful. I cant even choose which one I like best!

wow! it is the first time i read your poems... and it moved me into tears... poem with a story content. really nice!!! keep it up.

"One shot hits me with a pain
My body fell and it started to rain
I can't think positive because of you I cannot save
The second shot emerges and I think it was my death
But one thing strucks my head and it was you being dead
Open my eyes and I see you blocked the second shot
Sacrifice yourself for me and saved me from my death
Like an angle from a light
That gives me strength how to fight
I quickly catch you when you fall
Get my gun and kill them all
Howling for your life wish you hear me call"

this line has strucked me... ... really... blocking the second shot... just to save...
*Blood pressure increases* because it makes me see what is really happening...

Worst enemy of my life...

Pack my bags and ready to go
Walk slowly and left everything alone
The wind blews like I'm the only one,
Living in this world that is full of corpses lying in the groud

Joined these forces of the army
`Cause I was just picked as a mercenary
Have a mission in my life that must be done
And that is I must come back alive

Arrived in our destination
Grab my gun that is always my best companion
Face my enemies and follow the objectives
But I'd never noticed my plan will not work

Everybody except me is dying one by one...
I can't save them because I'm fighting alone
Fighting alone far away from them
Like a hawk trying to survive in his death...

I remember their smiles like it was just yesterday
But now I can only see, death just came all over them
Blood just spread all over the place
Stared at only one place, but there is nothing my sight can reach

Now, I'm back at the basecamp
With a spirit that is low like I just woke up.
Save my eyes from these tears
I don't want to be unleashed...

Delivered my report that was mission accomplished
All of them died except for one that was recruited
They gave everything including their lives
Just to have a reason for not leaving
And only death can stop their craziness...

I went home after I reported to them
Went to my apartment and unlock the door
Sit in my bed like a round ball
Run the blood of mine to convey
To see these faces in front of me
Yes, we have, and we begin
We are the scars from within
I'm ashsamed of what I become in the mirror
The face of my one true enemy
Hallelujah, some music
Let's take control
If I have to take these message door to door
See myself in every soul
With the mission
I'll make these my personal mission
Set me from the fire, from the fire...
Set me from the fire...
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Raja: I guess love is the most powerful thing in the earth... And with love you can do that is impossible for your eyes to see...

this poem... makes me picture out the hardships in the battle... the physical and emotional... ... ... a work of a soldier!!!
i just love on how you make the reader picture out the scenario. very impressive..
*heart beats hardly* *breathing is deep and irregular* because of reading your poems.! very nice!!!
*salutes*

yes, you are right... love makes us do what is impossible...
pushes us to our limitations...

Thank you Raja... *Salutes*

*salutes*
your poems are products of mind and heart... hardships and trials... love and war... with deep emotions... memories ... future... it seems you experience it all in the battlefield
*blood pressure is becoming normal* *heart beat stabilizes* *breathing is now normal and regular*