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    Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    Rain...

    By the cliff, along the shore
    I watch the waves that shows memories of you more
    I ask myself why I left you alone
    Is this my destiny tells that I should live and die alone!

    The wind blews and passed through me
    Like I said goodbye and doesn't respond to me
    Your tears fell and slaps me in the face
    Can't take what I've said and leaves me in this place

    As I go down to go to shore
    I saw a stone that is flat and strong
    And I throw it up in the weak waves,
    As the stone goes deep down the sea, the alarm was turned on
    I ran through the base to see what's going on
    Until I noticed that the attacked began in the place where she lives
    So I go there and hopes that you are fine

    The rain falls when I go inside the war...
    Every men that I kill is not enough to see you my dear
    And every people that dies is the reason for them to pay for their cries
    Every explosion that I pass the more reason that I shouldn't die
    To live forever with you ti'll I die...

    Finally, I came to your house
    It's not yet destroyed and I hope your safe there inside
    But one thing destroys all my hopes
    The house explodes to itself in front of me...
    I feel so sad that this thing happened to me...
    I blame myself for what I've done
    I left you alone and can't protect you from anyone
    That's not the reason you are gone!
    If only I'd stay this will not happen...
    I also want to die, i don't want to see tomorrow
    Without the warmth of your arms that takes the sorrow

    I hear your voice calling my name
    like im in heaven, dreaming with my shame
    I hear again your voice one more time
    I open my eyes, turns back at the same time
    Your in front of me with those tears flowing into your face slowly
    Run towards me and hug me tightly
    Promise I'll never say goodbye to you again forever
    And the rain suddenly stops and the war is over...
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    Rain... [2]

    We thought the war was finally over
    But the seek for blood and death are searching for donors
    Soldiers like robots that don't have emotions
    Kills all the people without thinking any opinions
    Howling their lives for them to survive
    Everyone of them looks like they are in full berserk
    The same with a small spark that explodes in the dark

    Now they are all herte at my sight
    Didn't noticed my calculations were right
    Surrounding us, cornered in one side
    Only thinking of you in my mind

    One shot hits me with a pain
    My body fell and it started to rain
    I can't think positive because of you I cannot save
    The second shot emerges and I think it was my death
    But one thing strucks my head and it was you being dead
    Open my eyes and I see you blocked the second shot
    Sacrifice yourself for me and saved me from my death
    Like an angel from a light
    That gives me strength how to fight
    I quickly catch you when you fall
    Get my gun and kill them all
    Howling for your life wish you hear me call

    I ran you to the nearest hospital
    Take care of you from the doctors giving all my trust to them out of myself
    Leaving you there lying in your bed, sleeping until you are awake
    Promised myself to leave you `cause even I can't protect myself
    Thinks that I'm not the right one for you and leave you once and for all

    It's been a long time since this rain doesn't stop falling
    Like the pain that's nside in my heart that is continously flowing
    So I go every place that I know you would like to go
    But there is no sign of you and adds to this rain
    That gives me sorrow...
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    Rain... [3]

    I think of the days when your still here
    Your always there for me to cheer me up when I'm feeling blue
    That realizes me I should not take things personally
    But now your gone, because of what I've done
    The day when the blue skies turns to gray

    Every war that I won, there's this rain that joins me on
    Sometimes I'm used to it, `cause I think I understand all what I've done
    Sit from the statue that appears like a devil
    It's still raining like it was neverending
    I lie down in a open field to watch the stars
    But the rainclouds blocks the way upon your wishing star
    I forgot there was the rain that reminds me you are gone

    Smiled and mesmerized the memories of your past
    Everytime I gaze at you, you always replenishes my soul
    You pump my heart with your hand, and if you stop I am done
    I promise you I'll never leave you and protect you with my life
    I'm always there for you to catch you when you fall
    But I guess I will never be there to catch you anymore

    I look at a place in the park we always go
    See someone in a umbrella, wonder who I saw
    She turned around and she looks like you, no it's really you
    You also see me and runs towards me
    Hug me tightly and cried deeply
    Now I realized the feeling of being hurt and left behind
    I'm wrong for what I've done, and caused me to be dark
    The rain stops, a shine comes out and ray at us
    We're both happy, so the sign the sunrise shows which makes a rainbow upon us...
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    Evil in me...

    I walk with the storm together with the sorrow
    That gives me strength to face tomorrow
    I see your face just like your mother
    And walks away thinks it doesn't matter

    Quite afar, I fell and hard to breathe
    Why is this happening, I hear my heart beat
    I feel I'm crushed like I do in my chest
    I kneel in my knees and smiles at my best

    I guess its the right time the evil will be unleashed
    From inside that I didn't noticed
    The evil spirit binds at my neck
    Through my body and to my head

    I morph in a blink of an eye
    Have my wings that suits me to fly
    Sold my soul to the evil that takes me forever till I die
    Fly away with fallen feathers and takes me in the sky...
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    Slave...

    Even I don't tell you,
    Your important to me
    Even I don't think of you,
    When I'm asleep your in my dream

    Even I'm look like a jerk
    Wish you could hear
    The scream of my feelings

    I'm your slave even you don't notice
    I swear to you sometimes I'm just ignoring you
    Wish you could hear
    In your hug I'm eager with

    I won't seek for another girl
    In you I will be satisfied
    Whatever you say to me
    Trust that I will obey

    Almost everytime
    Were like cats and dogs dear
    In your arms I'm happy

    I'm your slave even you don't notice
    I swear to you sometimes I just ignore you
    Wish you could hear
    In your hug I'm eager with

    Forced to catch the stars
    Just to stay with me

    I'm your slave even you don't notice
    I swear to you sometimes I just ignore you
    Wish you could hear
    In your hug I'm eager with

    Because your the only one that I want to sit with
    Whether its cold or hot the night is
    I just want you to know
    Your the only one that I will love...
    Last edited by SousukeSagara; Jul 08, 2006 at 11:33 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    I've read them all before and I was impressed ^_^
    It's more of a story rather than a poem though, still it's really touching
    Some phrases are long...and it'll sound better if it was shorten somhow. All it in all, great work

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    They are all so wonderful. I cant even choose which one I like best!
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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    wow! it is the first time i read your poems... and it moved me into tears... poem with a story content. really nice!!! keep it up.

    "One shot hits me with a pain
    My body fell and it started to rain
    I can't think positive because of you I cannot save
    The second shot emerges and I think it was my death
    But one thing strucks my head and it was you being dead
    Open my eyes and I see you blocked the second shot
    Sacrifice yourself for me and saved me from my death
    Like an angle from a light
    That gives me strength how to fight
    I quickly catch you when you fall
    Get my gun and kill them all
    Howling for your life wish you hear me call"

    this line has strucked me... ... really... blocking the second shot... just to save...
    *Blood pressure increases* because it makes me see what is really happening...

    Last edited by raja_psyche; Jul 08, 2006 at 11:31 PM.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    Worst enemy of my life...

    Pack my bags and ready to go
    Walk slowly and left everything alone
    The wind blews like I'm the only one,
    Living in this world that is full of corpses lying in the groud

    Joined these forces of the army
    `Cause I was just picked as a mercenary
    Have a mission in my life that must be done
    And that is I must come back alive

    Arrived in our destination
    Grab my gun that is always my best companion
    Face my enemies and follow the objectives
    But I'd never noticed my plan will not work

    Everybody except me is dying one by one...
    I can't save them because I'm fighting alone
    Fighting alone far away from them
    Like a hawk trying to survive in his death...

    I remember their smiles like it was just yesterday
    But now I can only see, death just came all over them
    Blood just spread all over the place
    Stared at only one place, but there is nothing my sight can reach

    Now, I'm back at the basecamp
    With a spirit that is low like I just woke up.
    Save my eyes from these tears
    I don't want to be unleashed...

    Delivered my report that was mission accomplished
    All of them died except for one that was recruited
    They gave everything including their lives
    Just to have a reason for not leaving
    And only death can stop their craziness...

    I went home after I reported to them
    Went to my apartment and unlock the door
    Sit in my bed like a round ball
    Run the blood of mine to convey
    To see these faces in front of me
    Yes, we have, and we begin
    We are the scars from within
    I'm ashsamed of what I become in the mirror
    The face of my one true enemy
    Hallelujah, some music
    Let's take control
    If I have to take these message door to door
    See myself in every soul
    With the mission
    I'll make these my personal mission
    Set me from the fire, from the fire...
    Set me from the fire...
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    Raja: I guess love is the most powerful thing in the earth... And with love you can do that is impossible for your eyes to see...
    Last edited by SousukeSagara; Jul 13, 2006 at 03:08 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    this poem... makes me picture out the hardships in the battle... the physical and emotional... ... ... a work of a soldier!!!
    i just love on how you make the reader picture out the scenario. very impressive..
    *heart beats hardly* *breathing is deep and irregular* because of reading your poems.! very nice!!!
    *salutes*

    yes, you are right... love makes us do what is impossible...
    pushes us to our limitations...
    Last edited by raja_psyche; Jul 08, 2006 at 11:33 PM.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    Thank you Raja... *Salutes*

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    *salutes*
    your poems are products of mind and heart... hardships and trials... love and war... with deep emotions... memories ... future... it seems you experience it all in the battlefield
    *blood pressure is becoming normal* *heart beat stabilizes* *breathing is now normal and regular*

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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