Thread: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

how did you know??? wahehehe!

A Sad Story...

It's morning, the rain is falling...
We were playing, running in circles
The love of my life,
But she didn't know, she's in my heart...

I want to tell her
But it's hard to say
Maybe she leave me,
And never see her again...

As I play a sad guitar piece
Never thought she was behind me
Ask me why I played that
I don't have any answer, so she's confused now...

I'm always running from myself
Forget to look back what's left
For once I'd never think,
That there was you in the end...

I don't want to wait forever
Just to say I love you
No more camouflage, I want to be exposed
And I'm not afraid to fall...

Stand and turns around
Chases the beat of my heart
Walks closer and hold her hand
Tells her "I love you..."

Tear falls through her eyes
Slaps my hand and runs fast
Follow her as the rain goes on
She slip and fell off, tried to help her but...
She said "Leave me alone!"

Stand up from where she left me
My heart that is fragile has been broken
Promised myself she's the only one I'll love
But she disappoints me and walk away from my path

Now there is no meaning for my life to live
Joined the war and left everything
Don't have any inspiration
`Cause she leave me alone...

As I leave my village where I grew
Tried to look back the times that passed
But don't realized anything wrong
Except for my love that is still my best friend at all...

The war ends but I don't die
As I marched to my village and count my steps left and right
I feel someones waiting,
But don't know who it is...

She runs towards me and hug me tightly
Noticed she was my love through her voice crying at me
Touch her face going through her hair
Wipe her tears and smiled, crying once again...

Touch my face and ask what's wrong
As I raise my head and wipe my tears
She was shocked, strucked, cried for what she saw...
I was blind...

how long have you been working on them

@ the poem "a sad story": ohhhhhhhhhhh............. the poem so sad............
but the poem has a deep essence which makes it reallly good...
makes me read from the first lines up to the very last.
congrats again Sir Sousuke!!! *salutes*
i just really fond about your poems!
keep it up!!!
*heartbeat is irregualar and deep* *breathing is also deep and irregular*
*eyes filled with salty substance*

@ Sousuke: i do hope you post more poems soon. waheheh!!!

"Stars..."

A picture of you reminds me,
How our years have gone so lonely(empty)
Why did you come and leave..?
Without saying that you love me...

Saying i love you again
Are you listening..?
Open your eyes once again
Are you crying

If only you could hear me
Shout your name
If only you could feel
My love again
The stars in the sky will
Never be the same
If only i have wings
So i can fly
I wanna be with you
For all the time
My love for you will never die
If only you were here...

oh... that poem... (stars)... is so sad...
that poem creates the image of the aches of parting ways... without telling what one feels... even for the last time... *death*
all in all great job!!!