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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    Hmmm... `I guess your a nursing student then...

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    how did you know??? wahehehe!

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    A Sad Story...

    It's morning, the rain is falling...
    We were playing, running in circles
    The love of my life,
    But she didn't know, she's in my heart...

    I want to tell her
    But it's hard to say
    Maybe she leave me,
    And never see her again...

    As I play a sad guitar piece
    Never thought she was behind me
    Ask me why I played that
    I don't have any answer, so she's confused now...

    I'm always running from myself
    Forget to look back what's left
    For once I'd never think,
    That there was you in the end...

    I don't want to wait forever
    Just to say I love you
    No more camouflage, I want to be exposed
    And I'm not afraid to fall...

    Stand and turns around
    Chases the beat of my heart
    Walks closer and hold her hand
    Tells her "I love you..."

    Tear falls through her eyes
    Slaps my hand and runs fast
    Follow her as the rain goes on
    She slip and fell off, tried to help her but...
    She said "Leave me alone!"

    Stand up from where she left me
    My heart that is fragile has been broken
    Promised myself she's the only one I'll love
    But she disappoints me and walk away from my path

    Now there is no meaning for my life to live
    Joined the war and left everything
    Don't have any inspiration
    `Cause she leave me alone...

    As I leave my village where I grew
    Tried to look back the times that passed
    But don't realized anything wrong
    Except for my love that is still my best friend at all...

    The war ends but I don't die
    As I marched to my village and count my steps left and right
    I feel someones waiting,
    But don't know who it is...

    She runs towards me and hug me tightly
    Noticed she was my love through her voice crying at me
    Touch her face going through her hair
    Wipe her tears and smiled, crying once again...

    Touch my face and ask what's wrong
    As I raise my head and wipe my tears
    She was shocked, strucked, cried for what she saw...
    I was blind...

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    how long have you been working on them

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    @ the poem "a sad story": ohhhhhhhhhhh............. the poem so sad............
    but the poem has a deep essence which makes it reallly good...
    makes me read from the first lines up to the very last.
    congrats again Sir Sousuke!!! *salutes*
    i just really fond about your poems!
    keep it up!!!
    *heartbeat is irregualar and deep* *breathing is also deep and irregular*
    *eyes filled with salty substance*
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    @ Sousuke: i do hope you post more poems soon. waheheh!!!

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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    "Stars..."

    A picture of you reminds me,
    How our years have gone so lonely(empty)
    Why did you come and leave..?
    Without saying that you love me...

    Saying i love you again
    Are you listening..?
    Open your eyes once again
    Are you crying

    If only you could hear me
    Shout your name
    If only you could feel
    My love again
    The stars in the sky will
    Never be the same
    If only i have wings
    So i can fly
    I wanna be with you
    For all the time
    My love for you will never die
    If only you were here...
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    Re: Sousuke Sagara's Creations...

    oh... that poem... (stars)... is so sad...
    that poem creates the image of the aches of parting ways... without telling what one feels... even for the last time... *death*
    all in all great job!!!

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