The moon is in a ring of light.
I have never seen it this bright.
It looks like a big eye ball,
theres a beautiful wall around it.
It looks like your eyes.
A big circle of moon light ray,
in it was thousands of shimmering diamonds and dimes.
Floating big white cottons passes by sometimes.
The wind must have blown quite strong up there,
though it seems so calm from down here.
Don't cover it i shouted,
but i cannot stop it from getting polluted.
My scenery is ruined by big massive cloud.
I could not cry out loud.
Nothing would happen even if i cry out.
All i could do is wait,
and slowly the cloud eats the bait and follows the wind.
Back shining and enchanting the sky,
i asked the god why...
Why am i feeling like wanting to fly.
Stay next together with the moon.
Walk up the milky way on and on.
Float across the the galaxy stylishly,
like a boat or a raft slowly,
but i don't wanna be lonely on this ride.
I hope one day we can share a boat,
drift together while sharing the same coat.
Keeping each other in each's grace.
Together we will brace through the asteroid fields,
warm while passing next with the meteoroid.
Opening my eyes...i realised...it was just a dream...
through the creamy milky ways,
it when we will whittle the days away...
when we are united...when we meet someday
This is where i lay, and wait...
haha ray this is quite cool and silly like u told me ^^
but still quite good and nicely set out ^^
ok so this is a bit long but hey you write very good poems.
so go ahead and write more.
lol ^^ ty :) yea.. silly.. :p xD lets fly~!!! XD
Sure my friend.. :D as time fl.. -.- goes by.. i'll do more.. whats with me and flying? XD
lol I liked this poem ray yes it's deffinatly silly lol I loved it keep it up!^^
:p my second silly poem at last.. :) it seems my mood is recovering :D i guess more silly ones coming up next :p
:laugh:Thx akura ^^ glad u liked it :p how silly is it? :D
I'm sorry but i don't see how this is silly... I mean... It seems sad to me kinda.. Your talking about dreaming of being with someone you care about and you thought it was real... that you were actually with them... but it wasn't.. it was only a dream... one that will be forgotten in time..
It was a good poem though.. i liked it and i think that you should keep up the great work.
:) ty for the comment jamie ^^ but it wont be forgotten...it's stamped in the poem..
sure ^^ will do so :) thx