Speaking to the Two

You have always brought me so much joy

And you have always brought me pain and sorrow

Comfort to speak my mind, express what was in my heart


Fear to make me run far away

Warm arms to hold me when I cry

Dry kisses that make me want to die

Peace

Anger

What I've always needed

Always what you wanted

Completeness so that I could stand alone

Nothing to help me to survive

So what will I do when I'm speaking to the both of you
Brought together in a union I will not interfere with
But always leaving me broken
I can not serve you both
For I love the one
And hate the other...

O.o This was like the most confusing poem making good sence I've ever read. I really wish not to go back to that terribly complicated game and get a head ache in place of this head-spin you've caused me to feel...

This is really a great work I must say. The colors had great impact, they both are so bright, reading alone one would seem really good- the other really bad; together they showed me perfectly the confusion the lyrical "me" must feel... And the ending was just perfect to finnish it all up.

Well only one suggestion maybe- punctuation? A bit of it would do to make it a bit less confusing, because I was on the border where it was hard to read :D:

But alltogether... A great work indeed!!!!!!!!! :)