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    Spider web

    I was sitting by the window pane
    I sat there just watching the summer rain
    When Lighting hit
    and the lights went out.

    It caught my eye
    The long thin lines
    Of the Most amazing thing i had ever seen
    there on the window
    up in the corner
    was a web.

    It was gray against the dark light outside
    It was small but big at the same time
    It held Its maker in the center
    The one that was black
    the one that was there in the back

    Same as in my mind
    as the spider made the web
    the same was happening in my head
    Wile i was looking
    my head was working

    Working the problems
    The Problems haunting me
    The Problems Stalking me

    Spider web in my head
    Working out my fate
    Helping me
    in more than one
    ways to kill my hate

    As i sat the spider continued her daly chore
    of webbing and weaving
    and watch me work out my mind even more



    this poem is about my adolesence...and the fact that i am working out myself...and still trying to figure out life.
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    Re: Spider web

    i like to poem except for the spider web parts. Im just freaked out by spiders and insects, anything related to tat too, but since it plays a significant part in the poem....i guess i don't mind. ^ ^ Still i find it an interesting poem.


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