Spinning.

Spinning.
The wheels spin in my head,
when I can't find you.
Though you're not here,
My thoughts are right behind you.
Try as I might to never let the skepticism come.
Theres no destraction long enough to keep my mind from...
...Spinning.

Spinning.
Twisting. Turning. My tummy
ties itself in knots.
Take this paranoia from me.
Take away these thoughts.
Nothing I can do to cure this belly ache of mine.
Wondering where you are, and if I ever cross your mind? Im...
...Spinning.

Spinning.
Twirling lines of smoke,
escaping from my lungs.
The equality of 2 hearts broke.
Silence from 2 tied tongues.
My heart for yours, and yours for mine. could we make an exchange?
Because this circle wont EVER stop turning. We're too much the same.
We're... Spinning.

Omg, what a nice poem!! So original, not like any of the others I have read! I love it, peach! But there is this one part that gets me to stop reading it:

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Spinning.
Twisting. Turning. My tummy
ties itself in knots.
Take this paranoia from me.
Take away these thoughts.
Nothing I can do to cure this belly ache of mine.
Wondering where you are, and if I ever cross you mind? Im...
...Spinning.

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^ ^ Other than that, lovely poem Peach! Keep it up!:thumb:

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Originally Posted by The White Wolf

Omg, what a nice poem!! So original, not like any of the others I have read! I love it, peach! But there is this one part that gets me to stop reading it:



^ ^ Other than that, lovely poem Peach! Keep it up!:thumb:

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OOOOOOOoooohhhh My bad! Thanx for bringing that to my attention.

That was very creative Peach_follows, i liked it. I hope to see more of your poems.

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Originally Posted by Peach_follows

OOOOOOOoooohhhh My bad! Thanx for bringing that to my attention.

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No problem, peach!! Continue on writing poetry! You're really good at it ^ ^