Nice poem Baal, you did a great job on this darky poem.
i've been crossing way behond of the mind
now im been taking out of my body
like a fish on fishing pole line
why am i getting taken?
hell or heaven i dont belive in neither
when i go to sleep i awake in my bed
same place were i closed my eyes
with voices, laughter of demons
and sobing of angels
so much confusion
i fought for my soul and got it back
but still i couldnt move or awake
so i just did the same when i go to bed
i closed my eyes and u awake with my soul
carrying my life and my tone
in the dream i could see darkness
human kind wasnt alive there was just darkness
and shining blue tears falling from the skys
my mind couldnt not get that out of my head
so once again i tried to go behond my mind
but there wasnt a dream or a sign
for hell or heaven to become one
Last edited by Baal; Sep 30, 2006 at 01:06 PM.
perdoname michelle!
Nice poem Baal, you did a great job on this darky poem.
That was an interesting poem. I can't say I've ever ready one quite like that. You did a very nice job with capturing your mood. Nice work.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
thanx evryone i will make another one cuz im feeling this curiosity through my mind for a long time.
perdoname michelle!
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