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    Spirit world

    i've been crossing way behond of the mind
    now im been taking out of my body
    like a fish on fishing pole line
    why am i getting taken?
    hell or heaven i dont belive in neither
    when i go to sleep i awake in my bed
    same place were i closed my eyes
    with voices, laughter of demons
    and sobing of angels
    so much confusion
    i fought for my soul and got it back
    but still i couldnt move or awake
    so i just did the same when i go to bed
    i closed my eyes and u awake with my soul
    carrying my life and my tone
    in the dream i could see darkness
    human kind wasnt alive there was just darkness
    and shining blue tears falling from the skys
    my mind couldnt not get that out of my head
    so once again i tried to go behond my mind
    but there wasnt a dream or a sign
    for hell or heaven to become one
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    perdoname michelle!

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    Nice poem Baal, you did a great job on this darky poem.

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    That was an interesting poem. I can't say I've ever ready one quite like that. You did a very nice job with capturing your mood. Nice work.
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    thanx evryone i will make another one cuz im feeling this curiosity through my mind for a long time.



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