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    Thy soul shall find itslfe alone
    'Mid dark thoughts of gray tombstone-
    Not one,of all the crowd,to pry
    Into thine secrecy.

    Be silent in that solitude,
    Which is not loneliness-forthen
    The spirits of the ded who stood
    In life brfore thee are again
    In death around thee-and their will
    Shall overshadow thee:be still.

    The night,tho'clear,shall frown-
    And the stars shall look not down
    From their high thrones in the heaven,
    With light like hope to mortals given-
    But thier red orbs,without beam,
    To thy weariness shall seem
    As a burning and a fever
    Which would cling to thee for ever.

    Now are thoughts thou shalt not banish,
    Now are visions ne'er to vanish;
    From thy spirit shall pass
    No more-like dew-drop from the grass.

    The breaze-the breath of God-is still-
    And the mist upon the hill,
    Shadowy-shadowy-yet unbroken,
    Is a symbol and token-
    How it hang upon the trees,
    A mystery of mysteries!

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    Quote Originally Posted by darkness of an angel View Post
    Thy soul shall find itslfe alone
    'Mid dark thoughts of gray tombstone-
    Not one,of all the crowd,to pry
    Into thine secrecy.

    Be silent in that solitude,
    Which is not loneliness-forthen
    The spirits of the ded who stood
    In life brfore thee are again
    In death around thee-and their will
    Shall overshadow thee:be still.

    The night,tho'clear,shall frown-
    And the stars shall look not down
    From their high thrones in the heaven,
    With light like hope to mortals given-
    But thier red orbs,without beam,
    To thy weariness shall seem
    As a burning and a fever
    Which would cling to thee for ever.

    Now are thoughts thou shalt not banish,
    Now are visions ne'er to vanish;
    From thy spirit shall pass
    No more-like dew-drop from the grass.

    The breaze-the breath of God-is still-
    And the mist upon the hill,
    Shadowy-shadowy-yet unbroken,
    Is a symbol and token-
    How it hang upon the trees,
    A mystery of mysteries!
    i love it i love it i love it!GREAT POEM! i think its one of the best ive read

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    Re: Spirits Of The Dead(I'm not sure if this is good)

    Very touching indeed.The poem has good imagery,supurb choice of words,it flows from beginning to end and the feeling that you put into it...I enjoyed it.

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    Re: Spirits Of The Dead(I'm not sure if this is good)

    i liked this poem alot it really does
    show alot of darkness and your poem
    style is cool i havnt read that style of
    writing in a long time i enjoyed it very awesome
    poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    i loved it its really good like everything about it lol
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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