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    Spoken Word

    Just a poem I wanted to write honoring the poets, weather it be written or spoken this one is for you! I hope I did a good job on this, so please let me know what you think!




    SPOKEN WORD by BlueFox1




    Words spoken destined to reach their highest plain
    Like the eternal phoenix rises from is slumbering ashes
    The warmth of voice wraps around the hearts of many
    As our minds begin to transcend the world’s eternal bend


    As poets we spend our time putting our emotions into words
    Thoughts flowing through our body like the essence of blood
    We take our pens and begin to write hoping that we’ll be heard
    Poignantly putting our minds to the test so lessons can be learned


    One by one the our words ring out like freedom bells of liberty
    Catching the curiosity of many like flies to the web of a spider
    As our voices transgress boundaries it reaches out to inspire
    Creating a movement within many causing a revolution of art


    Voices touch each one of us differently like rain hits the ground
    Remembering the writings and teaching that we have earned
    Poets begin to take form as their creations are realized all around
    Earning the titles of poetry known to us as spoken word
    Last edited by BlueFox1; Jul 19, 2007 at 09:29 AM.

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    Re: Spoken Word

    WOW!!!! This is amazing Fox!!!!! I truly love it!!! Awesome job as always!!!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Spoken Word

    Oh. Em. Gee.
    *picks jaw up off floor*
    Im... Im.... speachless....

    Nothing I type here would do justice to how impressed I am. Im inpsired... I need more!
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    Re: Spoken Word

    OMG that is one amazing poem its so perfect in every way please do more i love this one and would love to see more



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    Re: Spoken Word

    wow this is sooooooooooooo good. i love it. it does explain what real poets go through. it's kinda like i got to see what went through shakespears mind with this poem. it's so good great metaphors. loved it.
    every rose has a thorn

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    *Laughs at Peach's comment* Alright.
    I couldn't find a flaw in it ^^ Your poem was so descriptive, wildly imaginative.. such an honour to all poets. And yes, a poet's hope is only to express their feelings. Very well written >.< Hope to see more.

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    Re: Spoken Word

    Shinigami's_Angel: Thank you for you wonderful comments and I'm glad you liked it!

    Peach_follows: I'm truly glad and honored that you liked my poem! I felt like as poets we are not given enough credit and this is my way of saying thank you! I will do my best to keep them coming!

    aeonking: I truly greatful that you enjoyed my poem and I will continue to do more as long as there are poets out there, need and wanting to be heard.

    sangogirl: I appreciate your warm comment and I'm glad that I could give you and image to visualize while reading my poem. Thank you for you warm comment!

    elie26: Thank you for reading my poem and seeing where my wild imagination was going! I will continue to do more.


    To all who have read this poem I appreciate you kind comments and I hope that I have represented you all well with this poem! Poetry is a part of who I am and I'm glad to be around other poets such as yourselves! You guys are some of spoken words true revolutionary's! Keep on writing!
    Last edited by BlueFox1; Jul 19, 2007 at 01:24 PM.

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    Re: Spoken Word

    subarashi.. ^^ simply i can't say it's good or anything..it's more than great... good job...nice wording... and what a theme.. ^^

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