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    Re: Spoken Word

    I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! Just an awesome poem really!!!! I especially enjoy reading this part!!!!!
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    Voices touch each one of us differently like rain hits the ground
    Remembering the writings and teaching that we have earned
    Poets begin to take form as their creations are realized all around
    Earning the titles of poetry known to us as spoken word
    It was just so wonderful!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Re: Spoken Word

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    subarashi.. ^^ simply i can't say it's good or anything..it's more than great... good job...nice wording... and what a theme.. ^^
    Thanks RayMe for reading my poem and critiquing it! I appreciate your warm and awesome comments and I will do my best to continue to bring good poems!

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! Just an awesome poem really!!!! I especially enjoy reading this part!!!!!



    It was just so wonderful!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    KuwiRules: I glad that you enjoyed this poem and I will do my best to continue writing poems and sharing them here on AO! l'm glad that someone heard my voice! I look forward to more of your poems as well!

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    Very good. It's truly amazing. I will use this for inspiration and to look at for help. Keep it up.

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    Wow, that's truly amazing. It's so descriptive and word choice is pretty good. Just keep up the awesome work! xD

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    Re: Spoken Word

    Quote Originally Posted by Chaos105 View Post
    Very good. It's truly amazing. I will use this for inspiration and to look at for help. Keep it up.
    Chaos: I'm honored to hear that my poem inspired you and can also serve as a guide line for you to go by! I personally felt that I had to write a poem for one of the true forms or art, poetry or spoken word!

    Quote Originally Posted by Tifa Lockhart View Post
    Wow, that's truly amazing. It's so descriptive and word choice is pretty good. Just keep up the awesome work! xD
    Tifa Lockhart: Thank you for you awesome comment, and I will do my best to continue writing and giving the readers something they can relate to!

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