Thread: Spoken Word

Originally Posted by RayMe

subarashi.. ^^ simply i can't say it's good or anything..it's more than great... good job...nice wording... and what a theme.. ^^

Thanks RayMe for reading my poem and critiquing it! I appreciate your warm and awesome comments and I will do my best to continue to bring good poems!

Originally Posted by KuwiRules145

I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! I loved it!!!!! Just an awesome poem really!!!! I especially enjoy reading this part!!!!!



It was just so wonderful!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KuwiRules: I glad that you enjoyed this poem and I will do my best to continue writing poems and sharing them here on AO! l'm glad that someone heard my voice! I look forward to more of your poems as well!

Very good. It's truly amazing. I will use this for inspiration and to look at for help. Keep it up.

Wow, that's truly amazing. It's so descriptive and word choice is pretty good. Just keep up the awesome work! xD

Originally Posted by Chaos105

Very good. It's truly amazing. I will use this for inspiration and to look at for help. Keep it up.

Chaos: I'm honored to hear that my poem inspired you and can also serve as a guide line for you to go by! I personally felt that I had to write a poem for one of the true forms or art, poetry or spoken word!

Originally Posted by Tifa Lockhart

Wow, that's truly amazing. It's so descriptive and word choice is pretty good. Just keep up the awesome work! xD

Tifa Lockhart: Thank you for you awesome comment, and I will do my best to continue writing and giving the readers something they can relate to!