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Jun 12, 2007, 06:22 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play
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 Credits: 10,233 | spread his wings spread his wings We were once lovers but now friends. The feelings i had for him has never changed. I made him wait too long now he is gone. I know it's my fault. I'm sorry. I let him spread his wings and fly away. I try to catch up to him again but he was too fast I never wanted to be alone but i let him grow his wings. Now, i have to move on. So like him i'm going to spread my wings as well do u like it or not? plz reply
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Jun 12, 2007, 06:38 AM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: spread his wings ^^ a nice poem i'd say...but it needs more methaphor.. forgot to tell u that hehehehe.. :/ sorry... my darn fault... |
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Jun 12, 2007, 06:43 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play
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Credits: 10,233 | Re: spread his wings Quote:
 that's for the nice reply . it's rly nice of u. i like the poems u write too.
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Jun 12, 2007, 07:22 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: spread his wings very awesome poem and its true if you let someone go there wings will spread and the will fly away , but in the end its how you live with he/she leaving you . and the new love from the new he/she will make the one that flew away fade from memory so having wings to fly to a new destination is a good thing. |
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Jun 12, 2007, 10:23 PM
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| Otaku  | Re: spread his wings daman i hope not that in my mind *hope that *.. i love it very sad and there is some sorry and it's tribble to left him ...by the way i love this poem really good work ryomakurosaki...hope to see more from you ..
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