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    spread his wings

    spread his wings

    We were once lovers
    but now friends.
    The feelings i had for him
    has never changed.
    I made him wait too long
    now he is gone.

    I know it's my fault.
    I'm sorry.
    I let him spread his wings
    and fly away.
    I try to catch up to him
    again but he was too fast

    I never wanted to be alone
    but i let him grow his wings.
    Now, i have to move on.
    So like him i'm going to spread
    my wings as well

    do u like it or not? plz reply
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    Re: spread his wings

    ^^ a nice poem i'd say...but it needs more methaphor.. forgot to tell u that
    hehehehe.. :/ sorry...
    my darn fault...

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    Re: spread his wings

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    ^^ a nice poem i'd say...but it needs more methaphor.. forgot to tell u that
    hehehehe.. :/ sorry...
    my darn fault...
    it's okay that's for the nice reply. it's rly nice of u. i like the poems u write too.
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    Re: spread his wings

    loved your poem it's good of you to do something like that, sorry it took so long for the post

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    Re: spread his wings

    very awesome poem and its true if you let
    someone go there wings will spread and the will
    fly away , but in the end its how you live with
    he/she leaving you .

    and the new love from the new he/she will
    make the one that flew away fade from memory
    so having wings to fly to a new destination is a good
    thing.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: spread his wings

    daman i hope not that in my mind *hope that *..
    i love it very sad and there is some sorry and it's tribble to left him ...by the way i love this poem really good work ryomakurosaki...hope to see more from you ..

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