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    spread my wings

    I've had these wings
    since i was small
    they're not visible
    but here they are.


    how i've grown up
    all these years
    you have tought me
    not to fear.

    now these wings need to spread
    and show how i can fly
    you have tought me alot in my life
    still i try not to cry....
    i need to spread my wings.......

    hope you like it ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: spread my wings

    It's very interesting to read.

    now these wings need to spread
    and show how i can fly
    you have tought me alot in my life
    still i try not to cry....
    i need to spread my wings.......
    This part almost moved me,keep writing more!^^

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    Re: spread my wings

    Lovely poem really! It's just so well... not even great words can't explain if there is then well I just can't think it. But it's just so great and very understanding! I hope to see more!
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    Re: spread my wings

    this poem is pretty good but...
    ...
    It makes me think of the lenny kravitz song "Fly away"
    Mr. Fangs

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    Re: spread my wings

    *~meow~*very nice peom I love it! Very nice description and use of words! hope to see more!*~meow~*



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    Re: spread my wings

    thanks guys thanks alot i really aprecciate this thanks ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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