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    Spring

    Spring is here
    the sky is shedding here tears
    The rain moves in just making it's way
    the wind blows through, it's time to play
    The sun smiles down then disappears
    knowing her time to shine quickly nears.
    Last edited by kingmustang; Apr 11, 2010 at 02:50 PM. Reason: Trying to fix format

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    Re: Spring

    Great use of personification and vivid imagery. Again it evokes a calm peaceful feeling.

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    Re: Spring

    Thanks Beast! I am glade you liked it. I lost my note book so I can't find that one I was going to post, but I wrote one this weekend that I will post as soon as I can barrow a computer, having incorrect formatting really takes something away from the writing.
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