This feeling... This feeling..
Coming every day
I feel the need to see your face
I feel the need to say...
Come here... Come here...
So I can show
How much I really care
I'll comfort you,
I'll hold you tight
Oh yes...Oh yes
We'll go on and on
Making sweet love all night
And still, In the morning,
I know that things will be all right
And still... And still
As I sit here
Wallowing in the rain
I can't help but think that
I don't even know you're name...
This should freak out some of the girls lol
But it is very true and it should send a message out
And I did it cause I was kinda bored lol
hmm... interesting... I started laughing when I read the third stranza and when I read the last line I was like @.@ wtf? Nice work with playing with the minds of people... ^^
A really interesting poem and realy good for one that was written because of boredom... that's a great thing if you're able to write just when you need to ^^
I really enjoyed reading it and will be looking forward for the next poem...
im not a girl so i like it very much i stared laughing with with the sweet love all night on into the morining part i can write out boredem brain wont work then except when im in school thats i start drawing great i know ur gonna write more so ill be the hunt for your name
I agree with the first guy, that third stanza was pretty funny, good work on the poem!
I've always had this sick really romanticised idea about stalkery and obsession so I find this poem to be really sweet rather then creepy or anything like that. I used to day dream as a kid/teenager about someone stalking or obsessing over me. If osmeone had written something like this and directed it at me... I'd have been elated. And like everyone else, the way you presented the stalkerism was pretty funny, I giggled.
Thanks guys, that's what I was going for.
That creepy, funny, romantic thing that people seem to enjoy.
hey great work very nice poem and alot of romance nice work;)good job go go you!!!♥~*The Princess*~♥
Do you know why I avoided this? People have reffered to me as "stalker", "Psycho-bitch" ect....
So I was unsure if this would be easy for me to read. but now that I see its from a stalkers prespective... Im all for it!
and I love the repeated words that start off the stanzas, nice touch.