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    Stalker

    This feeling... This feeling..
    Coming every day
    I feel the need to see your face
    I feel the need to say...

    Come here... Come here...
    So I can show
    How much I really care
    I'll comfort you,
    I'll hold you tight
    Preferably bare

    Oh yes...Oh yes
    We'll go on and on
    Making sweet love all night
    And still, In the morning,
    I know that things will be all right

    And still... And still
    As I sit here
    Wallowing in the rain
    I can't help but think that
    I don't even know you're name...


    This should freak out some of the girls lol
    But it is very true and it should send a message out
    And I did it cause I was kinda bored lol


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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    Re: Stalker

    hmm... interesting... I started laughing when I read the third stranza and when I read the last line I was like @.@ wtf? Nice work with playing with the minds of people... ^^

    A really interesting poem and realy good for one that was written because of boredom... that's a great thing if you're able to write just when you need to ^^

    I really enjoyed reading it and will be looking forward for the next poem...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Stalker

    im not a girl so i like it very much i stared laughing with with the sweet love all night on into the morining part i can write out boredem brain wont work then except when im in school thats i start drawing great i know ur gonna write more so ill be the hunt for your name
    Last edited by halo3master; Jul 19, 2007 at 12:46 PM. Reason: forgot something

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    Re: Stalker

    I agree with the first guy, that third stanza was pretty funny, good work on the poem!

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    Re: Stalker

    I've always had this sick really romanticised idea about stalkery and obsession so I find this poem to be really sweet rather then creepy or anything like that. I used to day dream as a kid/teenager about someone stalking or obsessing over me. If osmeone had written something like this and directed it at me... I'd have been elated. And like everyone else, the way you presented the stalkerism was pretty funny, I giggled.

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    Re: Stalker

    Thanks guys, that's what I was going for.

    That creepy, funny, romantic thing that people seem to enjoy.


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    Re: Stalker

    hey great work very nice poem and alot of romance nice workgood job go go you!!!♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Stalker

    Do you know why I avoided this? People have reffered to me as "stalker", "Psycho-bitch" ect....

    So I was unsure if this would be easy for me to read. but now that I see its from a stalkers prespective... Im all for it!
    and I love the repeated words that start off the stanzas, nice touch.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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