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    Standing next to you with a burning question

    Standing next to you with a burning question

    Standing next to you
    With a burning question
    Just wanting to hold you
    To gain your affection

    Just sitting with you
    In silence and shade
    Laying next to you
    All my worries fade

    The comfort of you
    Your hand on my cheek
    Your head on my chest
    With silk hair so sleek

    A kiss on your hand
    My first burning test
    Then you kissed my neck
    With burning request

    Your lips are still haunting
    My dreams and my hopes
    With the searing hot mark
    They left on my throat

    One burning question
    Remains in my head
    Would you do me the honor
    Of being my girlfriend

    I actually emailed this to a girl that i've been seeing and she said yes. I'm so happy now.
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    Re: Standing next to you with a burning question

    Yay for u bud^_^ i am happy for u!!! it it is a cute poem and i love it way to go bud....keep it up!!!
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    Re: Standing next to you with a burning question

    wow........this is good news for u dude. Hope u enjoy the time u have with her. BTW ur poem rocks since it's from the heart. the triumph of knowing tht u have won the privilge to be with her.

    YAY 790 th post

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    Re: Standing next to you with a burning question

    *blushes and smiles* that was a really sweet poem...^//^

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    Re: Standing next to you with a burning question

    Thank you. I thought so too.
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    Re: Standing next to you with a burning question

    I think it's great that it worked out for you. I like it, it's good

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    Re: Standing next to you with a burning question

    I'm glad that it worked too because it took me a whole night to write it. There were four drafts.
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    Re: Standing next to you with a burning question

    this poem is awesome man, the pattern that you used catches the readers attention pretty fast. nice job.

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