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    stands her ground

    when she's all alone she wants to be found,
    she feels like she's going to cry
    but that first tear will not stop.. she brakes down,
    then she would sigh..

    she wants to be heard but no one is near
    but when she speaks, she is just not heard...
    she comes crashing down in fear
    just so alone so she dosen't say a word..

    as she stands in the rain,
    she wants to be found
    but she keeps running from the pain,
    so she stands her ground

    but as she stands she feel like she's falling down,
    so she stands throw the pain
    she stands her ground,
    so she could be found again...

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    Re: stands her ground

    Literary, dark angle was it you that the girl represents in your poem?
    GOOD! Job
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
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    Re: stands her ground

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    Literary, dark angle was it you that the girl represents in your poem?
    GOOD! Job
    yeah, thank you so very much! :P i try hard in the poems i write and i put myself and the guy i'm with into them.

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    Re: stands her ground

    Good job! You did a good job putting yourself into it.
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