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    stars

    the stars can tell you many things
    about your life
    it is your choice to believe in magic

    wonderful things will happen to those who believe
    in the powerful potions of Destiny

    they say Love is magic to those with gifted eyes
    may be whom to conceited lies

    Love is like a game
    you either win or you lose;
    a game so harsh feelings get hurt

    no one knows wheter they'll find "Mr.Right" or "Ms.Perfect"
    you just have to take a chance
    and go for it

    we hide our feelings because we feel
    unsure about ourselves
    about our lives
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    Re: stars

    Hmm... not bad... but if u could put them in stanza's it would be better.. too hard to read them like this ^^ keep up the good work ^^

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    Re: stars

    good job.^^i agree with ray though,you could use a bit of space between the lines of your poem so it's easy to read better.good poem though but try to get focused on the rhyming you kinda went off it.^^ keep it ↑.....very good description btw.
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    Re: stars

    well thank you for the advice^^ ill remember that next time^^

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    Re: stars

    Hmm...u can change that now though ^^ try clicking on edit.. and put some spaces..
    ^^

    I gotta say...ur poem is quite true..i like the opening ^^

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    Re: stars

    ok i put more spaces so i think i fixed it^^lol

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