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Reply With QuoteSTANZAS. You know what I want from you.
If I could start from scratch,
I wouldn't change much a thing
I'd still have my middle name on that ring,
I'd still enjoy watching the rain and sing.
My friends wouldn't change
Brian David, and still chill with Rey.
I'd fix my mistakes...
do what ever it takes.
Make sure I never get caught
for helpin that little kid.
I woulda made sure to show my face,
but instead I ran to a wall and hid.
Make sure I don't go off and make haste
of slow decisions.
I'd enjoy my childhood,
my grandmother,
cherish our moments together.
The renegade was forgotten,
the outcast was cast aside,
and the soulja lost in war....
But luckily,
a dream never dies.
Its just misplaced with lies,
or forgotten,
but when remembered
its hard to put it to sleep
it won't stay in the dirt,
it is something that you can't hurt.
Cuz, I'ma m0th6rf*ck!n Renegade
The outcast, the deuce os spades
and its true.
I'm a soulja
and everywhere I see a soulja, a soulja
everywhere I see a soulja....
like me.
You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.
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There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?
STANZAS. You know what I want from you.
Seduced by Flesh
I would suggest you to write your poems in stanzas of at least 4 lines each. It was a great poem though.
I don't really think you NEED stanzas to have a great poem, because i think this one was good like it was. Stanzas are good, but I liked! Keep rollin, soulja.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
lol it is true, but a for a poem to be at leats prefect it needs stanzas.Originally Posted by Sincere
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