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Old Nov 08, 2007, 05:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Statistical anomoly

Nothing

Bored out of my mind.
I must be crazy.
Nothing to do.
Maybe I am just lazy.

I sit and ponder.
Just thinking about you.
Mind full of wonder.
What am I going to do?

The day you left,
Was the day my heart turned to stone.
I think to my self,
When will you come home?

I need you now,
And I know you need me.
I am nothing you know.
Nothing when ur not next to me.

Broken

The way she looks

I just can't help but stare

When she looks at me

It is as thought I am not there

Feeling lost

Memories forgotten

Endless loss

My heart broken

Love me

Divided we stand
Parted by one
Your heart I demand
She desires your love

Loving you are
Love me you don't
Faithful to her
Be mine you won't

Death

In pain

Broken

Heart slain

Forsaken

Love lost

Heart bleeding

Deep frost

Pain fleeting

Save me tonight

I AM THE SHADOW

I am the shadow of all.

Always there But never noticed.

Walked on every day and not a word of care is expressed for me.

I am the shadow of all.

Have you noticed me?

I am the shadow of all.

You see me only when you are alone.

I am the shadow of all.

The darkness swallows me whole.

Tired

Tired of being ignored

Tired of being let down

Tired of being a mistake

Tired of never being happy

Tired of being alone

Tired of not knowing what to do

Tired of being here

And tired of not being able to have you

Good-bye

Tired of being let down

Tired of being cast aside

Every blow crushing,

To ones' pride

You've left me no choice

And now I say good-bye

I'll miss the sound of your voice

And the love I had inside

Bold I once was

But bold no more

Heart shattered to peices

Crushed into the floor

Leftwithout answers

And never knowing why

Here is my last words to you

"Good-bye"

You never saw me


I saw you but

you never saw me

I liked you but

you never liked me

I admired you but

you never admired me

I fell for you but

you never fell for me

I needed you but

you never needed me

I cried for you but

you never cried for me

I was there for you but

you were never there for me

And I stiLl love you but

you still dont love me
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Old Nov 08, 2007, 06:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Statistical anomoly

They all are really sad. I like that they're simple and they rhyme and flow well. And yet they're very emotional. I like them a lot. I hope to see more from you.
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Old Nov 08, 2007, 08:41 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Quite sad, i like the forst one with the ryimng! great job! You have a uniqe atyle keep it up cant wait for more!
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Old Nov 08, 2007, 02:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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They all are really sad. I like that they're simple and they rhyme and flow well. And yet they're very emotional. I like them a lot. I hope to see more from you.
I know
all written while i was in a bad state of mind
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Old Nov 08, 2007, 03:12 PM   #5 (permalink)
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all written while i was in a bad state of mind
IT happens. I personally find that's the best time for me to write. And it helps me feel better too.
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Old Nov 08, 2007, 06:23 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Statistical anomoly

I agree with bratling there... you did a very nice work ^^ good job...

hmm...next time when you are posting a poem...i suggest you put each in different threads.. but do not post more than 4 threads in a day @.@ thats againts the rules..

keep up the good work ^^ and i will be reading more from you..
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Old Nov 09, 2007, 03:39 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I agree with bratling there... you did a very nice work ^^ good job...

hmm...next time when you are posting a poem...i suggest you put each in different threads.. but do not post more than 4 threads in a day @.@ thats againts the rules..

keep up the good work ^^ and i will be reading more from you..
lol i found that out the hard way
i posted like 4
and i got a lvl 4 thingy majigger
but if i had put em all in sep things i would have not been able to post what i did in cyber lounge but i thank you for the advice and teh comments on my work
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