Statistical anomoly

starfire1036 · Nov 08, 2007, 05:41 AM

Nothing

Bored out of my mind.
I must be crazy.
Nothing to do.
Maybe I am just lazy.

I sit and ponder.
Just thinking about you.
Mind full of wonder.
What am I going to do?

The day you left,
Was the day my heart turned to stone.
I think to my self,
When will you come home?

I need you now,
And I know you need me.
I am nothing you know.
Nothing when ur not next to me.

Broken

The way she looks

I just can't help but stare

When she looks at me

It is as thought I am not there

Feeling lost

Memories forgotten

Endless loss

My heart broken

Love me

Divided we stand
Parted by one
Your heart I demand
She desires your love

Loving you are
Love me you don't
Faithful to her
Be mine you won't

Death

In pain

Broken

Heart slain

Forsaken

Love lost

Heart bleeding

Deep frost

Pain fleeting

Save me tonight

I AM THE SHADOW

I am the shadow of all.

Always there But never noticed.

Walked on every day and not a word of care is expressed for me.

I am the shadow of all.

Have you noticed me?

I am the shadow of all.

You see me only when you are alone.

I am the shadow of all.

The darkness swallows me whole.

Tired

Tired of being ignored

Tired of being let down

Tired of being a mistake

Tired of never being happy

Tired of being alone

Tired of not knowing what to do

Tired of being here

And tired of not being able to have you

Good-bye

Tired of being let down

Tired of being cast aside

Every blow crushing,

To ones' pride

You've left me no choice

And now I say good-bye

I'll miss the sound of your voice

And the love I had inside

Bold I once was

But bold no more

Heart shattered to peices

Crushed into the floor

Leftwithout answers

And never knowing why

Here is my last words to you

"Good-bye"

You never saw me

I saw you but

you never saw me

I liked you but

you never liked me

I admired you but

you never admired me

I fell for you but

you never fell for me

I needed you but

you never needed me

I cried for you but

you never cried for me

I was there for you but

you were never there for me

And I stiLl love you but

you still dont love me

bratling · Nov 08, 2007, 06:27 AM

They all are really sad. I like that they're simple and they rhyme and flow well. And yet they're very emotional. I like them a lot. I hope to see more from you.

highteckdudu · Nov 08, 2007, 08:41 AM

Quite sad, i like the forst one with the ryimng! great job! You have a uniqe atyle keep it up cant wait for more!

starfire1036 · Nov 08, 2007, 02:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bratling

They all are really sad. I like that they're simple and they rhyme and flow well. And yet they're very emotional. I like them a lot. I hope to see more from you.

I know
all written while i was in a bad state of mind

bratling · Nov 08, 2007, 03:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by starfire1036

I know
all written while i was in a bad state of mind

IT happens. I personally find that's the best time for me to write. And it helps me feel better too.

*RayMe* · Nov 08, 2007, 06:23 PM

I agree with bratling there... you did a very nice work ^^ good job...

hmm...next time when you are posting a poem...i suggest you put each in different threads.. but do not post more than 4 threads in a day @.@ thats againts the rules..

keep up the good work ^^ and i will be reading more from you..

starfire1036 · Nov 09, 2007, 03:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RayMe

I agree with bratling there... you did a very nice work ^^ good job...

hmm...next time when you are posting a poem...i suggest you put each in different threads.. but do not post more than 4 threads in a day @.@ thats againts the rules..

keep up the good work ^^ and i will be reading more from you..

lol i found that out the hard way
i posted like 4
and i got a lvl 4 thingy majigger
but if i had put em all in sep things i would have not been able to post what i did in cyber lounge but i thank you for the advice and teh comments on my work

Nov 08, 2007, 05:41 AM	#1 (permalink)
starfire1036 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 195 Thanks: 43 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 8,406	Statistical anomoly Nothing Bored out of my mind. I must be crazy. Nothing to do. Maybe I am just lazy. I sit and ponder. Just thinking about you. Mind full of wonder. What am I going to do? The day you left, Was the day my heart turned to stone. I think to my self, When will you come home? I need you now, And I know you need me. I am nothing you know. Nothing when ur not next to me. Broken The way she looks I just can't help but stare When she looks at me It is as thought I am not there Feeling lost Memories forgotten Endless loss My heart broken Love me Divided we stand Parted by one Your heart I demand She desires your love Loving you are Love me you don't Faithful to her Be mine you won't Death In pain Broken Heart slain Forsaken Love lost Heart bleeding Deep frost Pain fleeting Save me tonight I AM THE SHADOW I am the shadow of all. Always there But never noticed. Walked on every day and not a word of care is expressed for me. I am the shadow of all. Have you noticed me? I am the shadow of all. You see me only when you are alone. I am the shadow of all. The darkness swallows me whole. Tired Tired of being ignored Tired of being let down Tired of being a mistake Tired of never being happy Tired of being alone Tired of not knowing what to do Tired of being here And tired of not being able to have you Good-bye Tired of being let down Tired of being cast aside Every blow crushing, To ones' pride You've left me no choice And now I say good-bye I'll miss the sound of your voice And the love I had inside Bold I once was But bold no more Heart shattered to peices Crushed into the floor Leftwithout answers And never knowing why Here is my last words to you "Good-bye" You never saw me I saw you but you never saw me I liked you but you never liked me I admired you but you never admired me I fell for you but you never fell for me I needed you but you never needed me I cried for you but you never cried for me I was there for you but you were never there for me And I stiLl love you but you still dont love me
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Nov 08, 2007, 06:27 AM	#2 (permalink)
bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 16 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 11,816	Re: Statistical anomoly They all are really sad. I like that they're simple and they rhyme and flow well. And yet they're very emotional. I like them a lot. I hope to see more from you. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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Nov 08, 2007, 08:41 AM	#3 (permalink)
highteckdudu Where the journey begins! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that! Posts: 595 Thanks: 3 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 155,707	Re: Statistical anomoly Quite sad, i like the forst one with the ryimng! great job! You have a uniqe atyle keep it up cant wait for more! __________________ I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass! Visit www.highteckdudu.webs.com!
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Nov 08, 2007, 06:23 PM	#6 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: Statistical anomoly I agree with bratling there... you did a very nice work ^^ good job... hmm...next time when you are posting a poem...i suggest you put each in different threads.. but do not post more than 4 threads in a day @.@ thats againts the rules.. keep up the good work ^^ and i will be reading more from you.. __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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