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    Statistical anomoly

    Nothing

    Bored out of my mind.
    I must be crazy.
    Nothing to do.
    Maybe I am just lazy.

    I sit and ponder.
    Just thinking about you.
    Mind full of wonder.
    What am I going to do?

    The day you left,
    Was the day my heart turned to stone.
    I think to my self,
    When will you come home?

    I need you now,
    And I know you need me.
    I am nothing you know.
    Nothing when ur not next to me.

    Broken

    The way she looks

    I just can't help but stare

    When she looks at me

    It is as thought I am not there

    Feeling lost

    Memories forgotten

    Endless loss

    My heart broken

    Love me

    Divided we stand
    Parted by one
    Your heart I demand
    She desires your love

    Loving you are
    Love me you don't
    Faithful to her
    Be mine you won't

    Death

    In pain

    Broken

    Heart slain

    Forsaken

    Love lost

    Heart bleeding

    Deep frost

    Pain fleeting

    Save me tonight

    I AM THE SHADOW

    I am the shadow of all.

    Always there But never noticed.

    Walked on every day and not a word of care is expressed for me.

    I am the shadow of all.

    Have you noticed me?

    I am the shadow of all.

    You see me only when you are alone.

    I am the shadow of all.

    The darkness swallows me whole.

    Tired

    Tired of being ignored

    Tired of being let down

    Tired of being a mistake

    Tired of never being happy

    Tired of being alone

    Tired of not knowing what to do

    Tired of being here

    And tired of not being able to have you

    Good-bye

    Tired of being let down

    Tired of being cast aside

    Every blow crushing,

    To ones' pride

    You've left me no choice

    And now I say good-bye

    I'll miss the sound of your voice

    And the love I had inside

    Bold I once was

    But bold no more

    Heart shattered to peices

    Crushed into the floor

    Leftwithout answers

    And never knowing why

    Here is my last words to you

    "Good-bye"

    You never saw me


    I saw you but

    you never saw me

    I liked you but

    you never liked me

    I admired you but

    you never admired me

    I fell for you but

    you never fell for me

    I needed you but

    you never needed me

    I cried for you but

    you never cried for me

    I was there for you but

    you were never there for me

    And I stiLl love you but

    you still dont love me

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    Re: Statistical anomoly

    They all are really sad. I like that they're simple and they rhyme and flow well. And yet they're very emotional. I like them a lot. I hope to see more from you.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Statistical anomoly

    Quite sad, i like the forst one with the ryimng! great job! You have a uniqe atyle keep it up cant wait for more!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Statistical anomoly

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    They all are really sad. I like that they're simple and they rhyme and flow well. And yet they're very emotional. I like them a lot. I hope to see more from you.
    I know
    all written while i was in a bad state of mind

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    Re: Statistical anomoly

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    I know
    all written while i was in a bad state of mind
    IT happens. I personally find that's the best time for me to write. And it helps me feel better too.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Statistical anomoly

    I agree with bratling there... you did a very nice work ^^ good job...

    hmm...next time when you are posting a poem...i suggest you put each in different threads.. but do not post more than 4 threads in a day @.@ thats againts the rules..

    keep up the good work ^^ and i will be reading more from you..

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    Re: Statistical anomoly

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    I agree with bratling there... you did a very nice work ^^ good job...

    hmm...next time when you are posting a poem...i suggest you put each in different threads.. but do not post more than 4 threads in a day @.@ thats againts the rules..

    keep up the good work ^^ and i will be reading more from you..
    lol i found that out the hard way
    i posted like 4
    and i got a lvl 4 thingy majigger
    but if i had put em all in sep things i would have not been able to post what i did in cyber lounge but i thank you for the advice and teh comments on my work

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