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    To Stay

    I stay because I feel I belong here
    For days I keep moving from place to place
    People thought I was in fear
    But, only from pity and disgrace

    I had no rights to be here or there
    Now I found a home I care
    People here care for me
    I know I was there

    Reason I left my home
    Everyone made fun of me
    They keep bothering me and won't stop
    At night they won't just let me be.

    I found a real good home
    I am no longer going anywhere
    As long I have to stay
    As long it's there.


    I made this one up in less than a minute lol. tell me what you think.
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    Re: To Stay

    Not bad for a poem you made up in a minute. It was kinda funny.
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    Re: To Stay

    I'm feel'n it... Glad u are goin' 2 stay... lol It was good for a minute poem though....

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: To Stay

    LOL, Thanks cherry and Inuruto, I found the words that were swarming in my head and I got it.

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    Re: To Stay

    I'm glad you were able to gather your thoughts enough to write them. I like the way you started it, and I love the second stanza (I care about you ). Your wording is okay as well.

    Though I myself like change and things to be different. I'm always unwilling to stay with one group of people or one person. I think that's what I got from it.

    Keep up the good works HK. I look forward to reading more.

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Thanks DS, wow I can't believe many people would be surpised that I did stay lol

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