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    Stay away

    Just gotta keep my head up
    Don't know where am walking too
    I can't stop thinking of the past
    It's always about you

    Trying not to lose myself
    You are always there
    Where did you come from?
    It's not like I care.

    Please go away
    I have no time to think
    Don't be here today
    I don't wanna sink

    I just want you to stop
    Leave me alone
    Quit following me
    Just begone.

    ok I couldn't figure anything out for the ending, got me confused lol. anyway tell me what you guys think.

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    Re: Stay away

    WOW!!!!!!!! This is a great poem alright and a bit like shocking to me! But thats why I love it!!!! I hope to see more of your great work!
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    Re: Stay away

    that is awesome I think it's a great poem it is sounds r4eally lone but it is great reminds me of myself alot now that i think about it it is great

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    Re: Stay away

    Wow!!! This poem is just so cool... it's so strange... in a good way... I... you've really made me speechless... hmmm....

    What I'd like to say is that I find myslef in this poem- trying to escape something, trying to run from my past, from a shadow that follows there... but the worse thing is that you don't really want it to leave... because it's something... someone you love...

    I really, really like this poem... a very nice work... and rythmes too... very cool

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    Re: Stay away

    wow this was a really cool poem! Please continue writing because I cant wait to read more.
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    Re: Stay away

    I really like this. I can totally empathize with the feeling behind it. Kinda mkaes me feel like swatting flies or something. But the rhyme scheme and such was fabulous.

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