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    Stedfast and Silent.

    Your breath so Weak
    Your mind I break
    Peace is what you seek
    That right is what I take take

    I am like fire
    and you like water
    I've killed your father
    your sister and mother

    A dream you seem to be In
    but you can not get out
    On my face grows an evil grin
    as i laugh while you scream and shout

    You dream to be free
    but your heart i've kept
    the horror you see
    in the days you've not slept

    You are mine now you see
    not a word to be uttered
    You stand still and solid
    inside you shutter

    Stedfast and silent
    You breathe no more
    Incased in cement
    Like art to adore.


    Just something i trew together if you cant tell haha....
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    Re: Stedfast and Silent.

    I think this is really good. it seems a bit choppy, if you know what I mean. but I really like it. ^ ^ you've got talent, so, write from your heart. and keep writting, you can only get better. ^ ^
    I think I've known you all along.
    I just lost your face in the crowed for a while.
    I think I've been holding my breath all my life, until you found me here tonight.
    So ask me now and I'll run away with you.

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    Re: Stedfast and Silent.

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    stedfast is the correct spelling BTW!!!! look it up on dictionaly.com. i want it to be the way I had it...

    stead·fast also sted·fast (stěd'fāst', -fəst) Pronunciation Key
    adj.
    Fixed or unchanging; steady.
    Firmly loyal or constant; unswerving. See Synonyms at faithful.

    [Middle English stedefast, from Old English stedefæst : stede, place; see stead + fæst, fixed, fast; see past- in Indo-European roots.]
    stead'fast'ly adv., stead'fast'ness n.

    sted·fast (stěd'fāst', -fəst) Pronunciation Key
    adj. Variant of steadfast.

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    Re: Steadfast and Silent.

    Intense and beautiful. All the more so because it is beautifully put together but addresses a dark subject matter.

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