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Reply With QuoteI think this is really good. it seems a bit choppy, if you know what I mean. but I really like it. ^ ^ you've got talent, so, write from your heart. and keep writting, you can only get better. ^ ^
Your breath so Weak
Your mind I break
Peace is what you seek
That right is what I take take
I am like fire
and you like water
I've killed your father
your sister and mother
A dream you seem to be In
but you can not get out
On my face grows an evil grin
as i laugh while you scream and shout
You dream to be free
but your heart i've kept
the horror you see
in the days you've not slept
You are mine now you see
not a word to be uttered
You stand still and solid
inside you shutter
Stedfast and silent
You breathe no more
Incased in cement
Like art to adore.
Just something i trew together if you cant tell haha....
Last edited by starfire1036; Jan 16, 2009 at 05:17 PM. Reason: edited title when the editing was not needed
I think this is really good. it seems a bit choppy, if you know what I mean. but I really like it. ^ ^ you've got talent, so, write from your heart. and keep writting, you can only get better. ^ ^
I think I've known you all along.
I just lost your face in the crowed for a while.
I think I've been holding my breath all my life, until you found me here tonight.
So ask me now and I'll run away with you.
Thanks
stedfast is the correct spelling BTW!!!! look it up on dictionaly.com. i want it to be the way I had it...
stead·fast also sted·fast (stěd'fāst', -fəst) Pronunciation Key
adj.
Fixed or unchanging; steady.
Firmly loyal or constant; unswerving. See Synonyms at faithful.
[Middle English stedefast, from Old English stedefæst : stede, place; see stead + fæst, fixed, fast; see past- in Indo-European roots.]
stead'fast'ly adv., stead'fast'ness n.
sted·fast (stěd'fāst', -fəst) Pronunciation Key
adj. Variant of steadfast.
Intense and beautiful. All the more so because it is beautifully put together but addresses a dark subject matter.
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