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    "to stop a wound from bleeding"*not mine*

    Rivers Shall Flow,
    Be Pure and crystalline,
    But red rivers must not,
    they must be trapped inside my being.

    This river so red,
    Must Be Stoped with a Golden Net
    Stop the now stop this bleed.
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    Re: "to stop a wound from bleeding" (poem)

    This poem was very unique in its concept and form.

    But, the lack of rhythm and still trying to half rhyme threw me of a bit.


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    Re: "to stop a wound from bleeding" (poem)

    I wasn't trying to rhyme in this poem.
    so yeah...
    this is nothing but a poem ^_^

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    Re: "to stop a wound from bleeding" (poem)

    Hmm, that's weird, maybe I'm just imagining it but, these sound like incantations for magic spells to me..


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    Re: "to stop a wound from bleeding" (poem)

    yeah,
    you're just imagining things ^_^
    there's nothing magical about this
    it's just a normal poem ^_^
    ok? ok ^_^

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    Re: "to stop a wound from bleeding" (poem)

    you're just imagining things ^_^
    there's nothing magical about this
    are you sure I got the same feeling from it as Meji did,
    but if you say it is just a normal poem, I can't say anything about it.
    But it was good.

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    Re: "to stop a wound from bleeding" (poem)

    I hate to do this to a fellow member but, this is not a poem. I did a back check on the poem just because I was sure I heard it somewhere and sure enough.

    LadyNakara.com - Lady Nakara welcomes you to her home for spirtual growth!

    On that page you'll also sight, Psychic Vampires and Stop The Rain and it's a safe bet you'll find the other incantations somewhere along this line.


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    Re: "to stop a wound from bleeding" (poem)

    I knew you would find out ^_^
    and you did a very nice job!
    but I didn't get it from that site
    I got it from a book I have.

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