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Reply With Quotehmm. it was good, i had to read it twice over to fully understand the depths of your poem. But i liked it.xP
Theres no disapation
for this antisipation
No fall from the crest
of this quickly rising heat
It just isn't like the rest
It won't be beat.
Building up higher and bigger
It's too much for me to figure
Out what to do
because I can't get over you
The look in your eyes,
Makes me realize all the lies
I've told to myself
Making me wish I could cut some ties
And take our book back off the shelf
Our stories not finished,
It's far from through
Even if hopes deminished
I can't stop thinking of you.
The last pages to be written in dreams
Because there simply isn't a means
Of making them come true.
Even if I did run away with you.
A happy ending just ain't possible
Because truth is, I belong in a hospital
My love is toxic, noxious,
detrimental to your health
I will only wilt your flower
Make you wither away and sway
With the breeze of your fruit growing trees
But lets you and me dream another hour
Before reality steals it all away
Just for now, don't mention any of them please.
hmm. it was good, i had to read it twice over to fully understand the depths of your poem. But i liked it.xP
Hmm... I like it... it's different... it seems more serious than most... more comlicated...
Enjoyed reading it, made me think about a lot of things in relationships...
Very well written, Chan. ^_^ Although, I don't believe that you belong in a hospital.
I'm a little afraid it's going to be taken too seriously and used against me. It's expression yes. But it's not litteral. Maybe i should have kept it in my journal.Originally Posted by atomik_sprout
Naw, you're straight. Who's gonna use a poem against you?
Taken wrong? Jeremy would probably not appriciate it very much.
I like this poem because it seems complicated but has a simple harmony to it. Nice job
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