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Reply With QuoteReally good. It put a face on the chaose a storm can bring
Tell me what you think! it is storming pretty bad where i am, so i just threw this together
Hail pounding against the window,
Matching the rhythm of my heart.
Lightning illuminating the sky-
The sound is tearing me apart.
Clouds are all a gloomy gray,
Casting their darkening shadows over all.
Thunder clasping and ringing in my ears-
Making sure the world knows its call.
Streets are flooding,
Children are crying,
People are cowering in their homes-
I’m in front of my window sighing.
Newscasters going wild with glee,
Tornados are starting to take form!
While I’m in front of my window sighing,
In this mid-June evening storm.
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oops- in the first paragragh, last line, i meant 'scene' not 'sound'
Last edited by forever a dreamer; Jun 21, 2006 at 06:58 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.
Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
Really good. It put a face on the chaose a storm can bring
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thanksthe storm did a whole lot of chaos where i live (jk!) all it did was send my cat down the hall
You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.
Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
that a very depressing poem my personality change in a instead keep up the good work
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thanks, yeah, i guess depressing is more of what i was goin' for
You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.
Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
Forever a Dreamer i think i like sound in there more than scene.
But i like the poem alot. Its a familiar poem, meaning sounds like others but still catches me. I like it. Its good to see that someone knows how to write a poem without all the rhyming. Thats like my pet peeve!
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
thanks nympho! and i think i'll take ur suggustion and change it back to sound
You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.
Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
oops i relise what you were saying and i take back my comment
and for those who think im crazy right now, sorry
Last edited by friend_of_fish; Jun 22, 2006 at 09:57 PM.
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