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    Storm

    Tell me what you think! it is storming pretty bad where i am, so i just threw this together


    Hail pounding against the window,
    Matching the rhythm of my heart.
    Lightning illuminating the sky-
    The sound is tearing me apart.

    Clouds are all a gloomy gray,
    Casting their darkening shadows over all.
    Thunder clasping and ringing in my ears-
    Making sure the world knows its call.

    Streets are flooding,
    Children are crying,
    People are cowering in their homes-
    I’m in front of my window sighing.

    Newscasters going wild with glee,
    Tornados are starting to take form!
    While I’m in front of my window sighing,
    In this mid-June evening storm.

    -----------------------------Double Post Merge---------------------------------------------
    oops- in the first paragragh, last line, i meant 'scene' not 'sound'
    Last edited by forever a dreamer; Jun 21, 2006 at 06:58 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
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    Re: Storm

    Really good. It put a face on the chaose a storm can bring
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    Re: Storm

    thanks the storm did a whole lot of chaos where i live (jk!) all it did was send my cat down the hall
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    Re: Storm

    that a very depressing poem my personality change in a instead keep up the good work

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    Re: Storm

    thanks, yeah, i guess depressing is more of what i was goin' for
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    Re: Storm

    Forever a Dreamer i think i like sound in there more than scene.

    But i like the poem alot. Its a familiar poem, meaning sounds like others but still catches me. I like it. Its good to see that someone knows how to write a poem without all the rhyming. Thats like my pet peeve!

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    Re: Storm

    thanks nympho! and i think i'll take ur suggustion and change it back to sound
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    Re: Storm

    oops i relise what you were saying and i take back my comment
    and for those who think im crazy right now, sorry
    Last edited by friend_of_fish; Jun 22, 2006 at 09:57 PM.
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