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![]() ![]() Credits: 322 | The Storm A calmness envelops her soul The agitated branches whip about violently but to her they dance gracefully As the wind howls in frustration for it cannot topple a mountain, she hears her mother's lullaby sweetly sung, full of love Raindrops, as cold as death's chilly grin, fall upon her flaming skin She frowns momentarily in confusion for though she feels full of life, a cold numbing feeling starts to creep upon her She begins to panic for this feeling is new to her She struggles to recall what she fights for She tries to sit up, to shake off the grip of this foreign touch Where is life's comforting caress? What is this alien thing wrapping around her? Crushing her? Her lungs struggle to fuel her with the energy to fight, But like the tiny bird will struggle against the mighty wind, only to topple to the ground so does she Her mouth opens in a final scream as the golden halo consumes her Her frigid face is a mask of torment, reflecting a universal truth For death is not pretty |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,176 | Re: The Storm This is a nice poem whitefoxdemon! The imagery that this poem presents is awesome, I can picture this poem as I read it! Nice job and I'm looking forward to see what else you have in the future!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,000 | Re: The Storm This is very nice. Profound imagery indeed... When I read it id made me think of a tree in a storm, being struck by lightening or something. |
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