Thread: Storm

Originally Posted by hellknight

Am no long living in fear
No longer scared of lighting
Am loving the storm
It feels so exciting

Soaked in the rain
Pouring down on my face
Thunder roaring in the sky
Striking in one place

Am standing right here
Strike me in my heart
It won't hit me
Not since from the start

Getting stuck in mud
Standing in the cold
Watching the dark clouds
To see what life unfolds.

I wrote a poem called "Living life after the rain falls"
The feeling your poem gave me, is simular to the one I had when I wrote mine.

Like saying, despite hardships you will push foward. Perhaps even using lifes "storms" to your advantage. Life gives us all some bad weather, but we're stronger if we suvived the storm.

Ooh.. this is nicely done.. i like the theme here... using storm and what it feels like to conquer ur fear... nicely done ^^

Thanks Ray and Peach am sorry I didn't read yours and I didn't know lol, but I'll be sure NOT to copy off other writer's too, and thanks Peach.