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  1. Jun 26, 2006 02:27 AM #9
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    Re: Stormy Love

    You begin to move and sway
    Just like the waves
    Dance to the silent song of the sea
    Let's dance all night with the ocean

    i like this part it has love wrote
    all over it i like how you wrote this alot
    hollding someone till the sun rises and sutff
    i like this poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself
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    Re: Stormy Love

    This is wonderful! I love it. You may really have what it takes!
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    Re: Stormy Love

    I think this poem is much more better than the one you wrote I-don't-remember- the-name-after-all. lol it's interesting to me^^
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.
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  4. Jun 28, 2006 07:25 AM #12
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    Re: Stormy Love

    wow man that freaking kool, it was a great peom.
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  5. Jun 28, 2006 04:28 PM #13
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    Re: Stormy Love

    Thanks for all of your wonderful comments And 2 clear this up again,this is not a poem,their lyrics for a song okay I don't write poems much,mostly lyrics.But thanks for the comments anyway,they made me very happy.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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