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Old Sep 11, 2006, 02:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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its not a poem ist more a discription of my feelings

Once i looked at you and knew it would never be
then luck shone down on me and we got together
it worked for a while, it was hevan whilst it lasted
but then you made up some stupid excuse and droped me like a bomb
i took it bad at first, pleaded for you to re-think it
you shook your head and said "i dont wanna know"
my friends held me up in my time of need
and my wounds began to heal
finaly the scab has formed and the feeling dies away
i still look at you and wonder how good it could have been
but i know my lucks run out and it will never be
im sorry it had to end but im glad in a way
that now were just friends, and we can stay that way
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Old Sep 11, 2006, 10:50 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like this! It went at a different angle instead of poem format! You still got your emotions out there! As long as you write what you feel you can never go wrong! Good Job!

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Old Sep 12, 2006, 02:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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hey thankx i wasent sure what people would think of it coz its not in a poem format but i see what you mean and i agree i just have one corection to make

QUOTE "that now were just friends, and we can stay that way" were not friends we hardly talk and never see each other, ive tried to be friends but after the experianses we've had together i just cant talk to her or be around her without feeling uncomftable. well thats the truth
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