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    Strange.

    *Warning: The ending kinda sucks. Sorry, I couldn't think of anything else to put there. Writer's block is a b$@%#!)*

    Strange...
    The way people forget
    that they don't need to be
    in a gang or a set.

    Odd...
    How a once peaceful
    neighborhood can get
    violent as hell, and folks
    think it's all good.

    Strange...
    What is strange anyway?
    People call me synonyms
    of that word everyday!

    Weird...
    And the funny thing is
    I'm just bein' myself,
    while the others try to "fit in".

    Strange...
    The power one girl can have.
    You're upset when she cries,
    excited when she laughs.

    Funny...
    The lack of control one
    gets when he and his girl
    decide to get in to it.

    Strange...
    A grown man can't have his way.
    So he walks around moping
    and sulking all day.

    Akward...
    The way his mood bounces right back.
    Like his concience came around
    and gave him a smack.

    Strange...
    All the random things in life.
    One day you're a king,
    the next, someone's wife! (Wow!)

    Interesting...
    How differently we all deal
    with everything from too much stress,
    to choosing your next meal.


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    Re: Strange.

    lol again you put a lill bit of funnyness in the end... lol... I like your writer's blocks...

    I like this poem very much... a lot of thoughts there from love 'till street life and you put it together so that the reader doesn't even notice the changes...

    Yea, the ending is strange, these lines:
    One day you're a king,
    the next, someone's wife! (Wow!)
    Are just very weird... but it's ok. The last one is great again I have to say.

    A great work all together Sprout!!!! I'll be waiting for the next one!!! ^^ And for that storry too... lol

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    Re: Strange.

    Ee. I liked it mister. I told you that already toh. I like the way you decided to finish it... And I like the way it flows, it's rhythem or whatever you want to call it.

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    Re: Strange.

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Ee. I liked it mister. I told you that already toh. I like the way you decided to finish it... And I like the way it flows, it's rhythem or whatever you want to call it.
    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    lol again you put a lill bit of funnyness in the end... lol... I like your writer's blocks...

    I like this poem very much... a lot of thoughts there from love 'till street life and you put it together so that the reader doesn't even notice the changes...

    Yea, the ending is strange, these lines:

    Are just very weird... but it's ok. The last one is great again I have to say.

    A great work all together Sprout!!!! I'll be waiting for the next one!!! ^^ And for that storry too... lol
    Thanks to both of you! ^_^ I wasn't sure if I should post this one or not, seeing how it took me forever and a day to end it. And the last stanza where I mention being someone's wife--I guess you can say that I was just trying to put emphasis on the randomness of life. LOL. I couldn't think of anything else to put in there.

    I'm glad that both of you liked it though. Your opinions mean a lot to me--both of you! ^_^


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    Re: Strange.

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Strange...
    All the random things in life.
    One day you're a king,
    the next, someone's wife! (Wow!)
    .
    Wha?......
    Everthing was fine... even the ending... but Im not sure if I get this part. Is that like saying: One day you're runnin' sh*t, and the next day you're someones b*tch?

    If so.. I get it.
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    Re: Strange.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Wha?......
    Everthing was fine... even the ending... but Im not sure if I get this part. Is that like saying: One day you're runnin' sh*t, and the next day you're someones b*tch?

    If so.. I get it.
    Yeah, somethin' like that. I tried to make sense of life being so random, but I guess it didn't work the way I had planned. It's kinda like one day you're broke and the next, you find a winning lottery ticket. Somethin' like that.


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    Re: Strange.

    i like it but didnt get the end its not your fault though its just how writer block is

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    Re: Strange.

    Very strange!!!! But I like it! It was a bit hard to understand it but I got it!!!!!! I like your poem it was so just so...how do you say...hmmm.....I forgot how to say that word but it was just great and very interesting indeed!!!! so i hope to see more!!!
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