Thread: Strangers

ya kinda confused me at the end but it was a great poem overall. it actually expresses how people think when they see or meet a person, well i thought so anyway. great work!!

The poem gave me the warm feeling of friendship. It is very true about meeting other people and wanting to be firends (That's how it all starts). Now in the end, it had confuse me too...did you mean that when they go...they'll still be there in that person memories or no? Please clear that up for us. Overall, it had a nice flow with the ryhming and the lines itself. I would give it a 9/10. Keep it up, I would love to see more.

-There are a lot of talented writers in this forum.

Nice poem, Hell knight ... ^^ I would like to see more of your poetry ... ^^

Well... it made me think about the fact that I sometimes walk the street, looking at my feet, not notesing what's happening around, not noticing or recognising my friends, my classmates... That I haven't seen my friends from my last school for ages and have forgotten almost everything about them and how sad it all is...
This poem helps to open your eyes... Very nice!

Thank you all for this awesome comments lol and I really appreciated them too. and I'll be happy to write more for you.

Yes the last line was a bit confusing. Hopefully you can shed some light about it. I thought this poem was very meaningful. It reminds me of the online friends I have, how they connect to me. Overall, it was a nice read

I know I know, but am trying my best to get this better lol, but I'll do better on my next one.