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    A stray dog

    Nothing left to hold on to,
    Physical pain offering momentarily some lust.
    Rotting within that relentlessly holds onto the past,
    Healing among others similar of fate.
    Rallying as a blazing fire to the lost,
    Growing stronger as the bonds entwine.
    One step at a time,
    Wielding the begining of the end.
    Finally looking into the eternally staring eyes,
    Those that have always been there to see.




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    Re: A stray dog

    What no one commented this yet !?!?

    Nice poem soldat, it may be short but very well done.It had a very nice flow to it and i really liked were it rhymed.Hope to see more poems from you some time soon..
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    Re: A stray dog

    Hmm.. i was abt to comment it last night kogs...sadly i was too tired,.. :/

    Yup..i agreed with kogs there... it's very nice... ^^ keep up the good work master

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    Post Re: A stray dog

    wow...i like the poem....it is REALLY unique from the rest

    hope to read more from you ^_^


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