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    Stress

    Stress
    piles up like papers
    on a procrastinator's desk;
    Making the individual twitch with anxiety.
    So mischievious and sneaky,
    like a fox
    it creeps up behind its prey,
    taking it offguard.
    An uneasy feeling it is.
    Like an unsteady boat being teased
    by an angry sea.
    Looking at a mountain he's destined to climb;
    Stress is the thunderstorm awaiting his prescence.
    He knows.
    He knows.

    Like time on a broken clock, it makes you wonder.
    It plays with your mind.

    Stress is the light at the end of the tunnel
    that you know you cannot reach.

    STOP!
    I say to you.
    Don't let your mind succumb to its curse.
    To its wickedness.
    Take it in, if not, let it out.
    Let it be the milk to your cereal.
    Let it be the icing on your cake.

    You can climb that mountain!
    Those clouds will fade away.
    That fire will be extinguished.
    Like turbulance on a plane,
    it is just another bump in your
    mysterious life.

    An ecstasy available to you and me -

    Stress
    Can be surpassed.
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    Re: Stress

    UHHH not exatly sure about some parts, its not that they suck its just that i dont understand them. im pretty sure your poem is good, im just not the greatest judger lol

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    Re: Stress

    It's all right, spin. Thank you for reading it though. I'm sorry you couldn't understand some parts of it. I thought it was put out very bluntly. But then again, I am the one who wrote the poem, so I wouldn't know. I've never written a poem like this either. So, I'd be confused if I were in a position such as yourself, lol.

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    I got the jist of it and thought it was quite good. I liked the similies............or are they metaphors..................I'm not good at poetry terminology, lol. Either way, I liked it. .
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    Thank you, deo-chan. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Most of them were similes.

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    Re: Stress

    Who knew stress could be like that? Very good poem and I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Thank you CherryBlossom. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll post another one soon.

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    Re: Stress

    Hmm nice poem again~! good work.. u have a nice imagination lol

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