Good poem. The imagry is good and adds to it's greatness. I liked it. Hope to see more.(^.^)
lol, why thank you sir.ray! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you once again, for your comment.
Thank you PR Princess. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I look forward to writing more poetry.
Yes, good imagery. I'm just not too sure about the spacing and word choice in some parts. It gives me a fragmented read.
Seduced by Flesh
Hmm. Well, I must say that it was my first time writing a poem as unique as that one. I had no clue with it. I was just going with the flow, you know? Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kindness.