haha thats a reall good poem ^^ v bloodly but good ^^ i love the last few lines best ^^
Warning Do Not Read If You Are In Any Way Squemish!!!
I wash my hands
And wash my face
In hope that the blood
I've spilled will race away
But, the more I wash
The more that come
And the more that I
Have to slaughter
The blood I feel
None of it is mine
And none shall ever be mine
For I am too strong
I have murdered my wife
I have butchered my childeren
I have stained my life
I have bloodied my grave
The lives I have taken
Are high in number
And the more I slay
The deeper I fall
These are no longer
The minions of hell
All I dispatch now
Are the angels of heaven
Soon I fear
That even they will stop
And the final blood
In the end will be mine
For not even the devil
Wants my soul
For he knows
He would perish against me
Now I know
As the angel I now slay
Says, "God's next"
I feel adrenaline.
Now you fool
Come to your death
As my blade shall taste
The blood it's craved
As I see
The divine figure.
I smirk.
As my hand twitches.
God is dead.
There is no more
I am supreme
The supreme ruler of gore.
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
haha thats a reall good poem ^^ v bloodly but good ^^ i love the last few lines best ^^
*shivers*
@.@ WOW.... I like it^^ it was written beautifully and it had an amazing effect... I think it is a great poem.. I would love to hear more from you and keep up the good work^_^
Thanks.I'm glad it got attention so quickly too.
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
*shivers*....umm..shadow...uhh...very...nice description of words..i guess it really scared me but good work....keep it ↑ *runs away screaming*
Yeah, Bye.
thats good shadow. I like it.
Really awsomeo.
Keep it up.
Interesting how only the GIRLS actually read my scary poems and comment on them lol.
I've lost all respect for the men here. . .
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
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