Strike of Blood

shadowrulz · Aug 26, 2007, 11:26 AM

Warning Do Not Read If You Are In Any Way Squemish!!!

I wash my hands
And wash my face
In hope that the blood
I've spilled will race away

But, the more I wash
The more that come
And the more that I
Have to slaughter

The blood I feel
None of it is mine
And none shall ever be mine
For I am too strong

I have murdered my wife
I have butchered my childeren
I have stained my life
I have bloodied my grave

The lives I have taken
Are high in number
And the more I slay
The deeper I fall

These are no longer
The minions of hell
All I dispatch now
Are the angels of heaven

Soon I fear
That even they will stop
And the final blood
In the end will be mine

For not even the devil
Wants my soul
For he knows
He would perish against me

Now I know
As the angel I now slay
Says, "God's next"
I feel adrenaline.

Now you fool
Come to your death
As my blade shall taste
The blood it's craved

As I see
The divine figure.
I smirk.
As my hand twitches.

God is dead.
There is no more
I am supreme
The supreme ruler of gore.

*equinn* · Aug 26, 2007, 11:30 AM

haha thats a reall good poem ^^ v bloodly but good ^^ i love the last few lines best ^^

!Jamie5192 · Aug 26, 2007, 11:33 AM

*shivers*

@.@ WOW.... I like it^^ it was written beautifully and it had an amazing effect... I think it is a great poem.. I would love to hear more from you and keep up the good work^_^

shadowrulz · Aug 26, 2007, 11:34 AM

Thanks.

I'm glad it got attention so quickly too.

*iluvmyloser* · Aug 26, 2007, 11:57 AM

*shivers*....umm..shadow...uhh...very...nice description of words..i guess it really scared me but good work....keep it ↑ *runs away screaming*

*P.R. Princess* · Aug 26, 2007, 11:58 AM

thats good shadow. I like it.

Really awsomeo.

Keep it up.

Akura13 · Aug 26, 2007, 12:07 PM

ooooo oh my I love this poem! It describes good and it is scary but I love scary poems so I can't wait to see more!^^

shadowrulz · Aug 26, 2007, 12:13 PM

Interesting how only the GIRLS actually read my scary poems and comment on them lol.
I've lost all respect for the men here. . .

Aug 26, 2007, 11:26 AM	#1 (permalink)
shadowrulz Otaku Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?! Posts: 421 Thanks: 4 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Strike of Blood Warning Do Not Read If You Are In Any Way Squemish!!! I wash my hands And wash my face In hope that the blood I've spilled will race away But, the more I wash The more that come And the more that I Have to slaughter The blood I feel None of it is mine And none shall ever be mine For I am too strong I have murdered my wife I have butchered my childeren I have stained my life I have bloodied my grave The lives I have taken Are high in number And the more I slay The deeper I fall These are no longer The minions of hell All I dispatch now Are the angels of heaven Soon I fear That even they will stop And the final blood In the end will be mine For not even the devil Wants my soul For he knows He would perish against me Now I know As the angel I now slay Says, "God's next" I feel adrenaline. Now you fool Come to your death As my blade shall taste The blood it's craved As I see The divine figure. I smirk. As my hand twitches. God is dead. There is no more I am supreme The supreme ruler of gore. __________________ A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
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Aug 26, 2007, 11:30 AM	#2 (permalink)
equinn ★~Ao's Irish Fariy ~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,794 Thanks: 15 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts	Re: Strike of Blood haha thats a reall good poem ^^ v bloodly but good ^^ i love the last few lines best ^^ __________________ Elizabeth love's Philip
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Aug 26, 2007, 11:33 AM	#3 (permalink)
!Jamie5192 Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 377 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Strike of Blood shivers @.@ WOW.... I like it^^ it was written beautifully and it had an amazing effect... I think it is a great poem.. I would love to hear more from you and keep up the good work^_^
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Aug 26, 2007, 11:34 AM	#4 (permalink)
shadowrulz Otaku Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?! Posts: 421 Thanks: 4 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Re: Strike of Blood Thanks. I'm glad it got attention so quickly too. __________________ A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
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iluvmyloser Àddïctëd tø \|ăüghïñg :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: No where near, New York. Posts: 688 Thanks: 31 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts	Re: Strike of Blood shivers....umm..shadow...uhh...very...nice description of words..i guess it really scared me but good work....keep it ↑ runs away screaming __________________ Yeah, Bye.
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Aug 26, 2007, 11:58 AM	#6 (permalink)
P.R. Princess NalaMidnight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia Posts: 935 Thanks: 6 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts	Re: Strike of Blood thats good shadow. I like it. Really awsomeo. Keep it up. __________________ ~Falling in love one step at a time~ ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~
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Aug 26, 2007, 12:07 PM	#7 (permalink)
Akura13 §-Breakdown-§ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Vancouver! (I wish...) Posts: 813 Thanks: 16 Thanked 39 Times in 36 Posts	Re: Strike of Blood ooooo oh my I love this poem! It describes good and it is scary but I love scary poems so I can't wait to see more!^^ __________________ Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English! "Because it's okay to hide* your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)*
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shadowrulz Otaku Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?! Posts: 421 Thanks: 4 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Re: Strike of Blood Interesting how only the GIRLS actually read my scary poems and comment on them lol. I've lost all respect for the men here. . . __________________ A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
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