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    Strike of Blood

    Warning Do Not Read If You Are In Any Way Squemish!!!


    I wash my hands
    And wash my face
    In hope that the blood
    I've spilled will race away

    But, the more I wash
    The more that come
    And the more that I
    Have to slaughter

    The blood I feel
    None of it is mine
    And none shall ever be mine
    For I am too strong

    I have murdered my wife
    I have butchered my childeren
    I have stained my life
    I have bloodied my grave

    The lives I have taken
    Are high in number
    And the more I slay
    The deeper I fall

    These are no longer
    The minions of hell
    All I dispatch now
    Are the angels of heaven

    Soon I fear
    That even they will stop
    And the final blood
    In the end will be mine

    For not even the devil
    Wants my soul
    For he knows
    He would perish against me

    Now I know
    As the angel I now slay
    Says, "God's next"
    I feel adrenaline.

    Now you fool
    Come to your death
    As my blade shall taste
    The blood it's craved

    As I see
    The divine figure.
    I smirk.
    As my hand twitches.

    God is dead.
    There is no more
    I am supreme
    The supreme ruler of gore.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Strike of Blood

    haha thats a reall good poem ^^ v bloodly but good ^^ i love the last few lines best ^^

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    Re: Strike of Blood


    *shivers*

    @.@ WOW.... I like it^^ it was written beautifully and it had an amazing effect... I think it is a great poem.. I would love to hear more from you and keep up the good work^_^

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    Thanks. I'm glad it got attention so quickly too.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Strike of Blood

    *shivers*....umm..shadow...uhh...very...nice description of words..i guess it really scared me but good work....keep it ↑ *runs away screaming*
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Strike of Blood

    thats good shadow. I like it.

    Really awsomeo.

    Keep it up.

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    Re: Strike of Blood

    ooooo oh my I love this poem! It describes good and it is scary but I love scary poems so I can't wait to see more!^^



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    Re: Strike of Blood

    Interesting how only the GIRLS actually read my scary poems and comment on them lol.
    I've lost all respect for the men here. . .

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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