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    A Struggle for life

    Grasping hold of this light

    In throes of death

    knuckles white

    Must hold on

    Must keep up this fight

    for if I don't I will slip away

    forever lost in night

    The pain pours in

    Blinding my sight

    Can't breath but I must win

    My chest is tight

    Darkness starts creeping in

    I push it away with all my might

    Must not fall, must stand tall

    I focus all of my anger and all my spite

    Fear can be fought, I'll stay here

    if I wish to get through this plight

    eventually Death will make a mistake

    no matter how slight

    Grasping hold tighter the light

    Death will have to grip

    knuckles turning white


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    Re: A Struggle for life

    The finished work is always more beautiful than the some of its parts.

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    Re: A Struggle for life

    this is a great poem tho. and the balance between the struggle of life and death gives it a deeper meaning than you might gather on your first read.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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