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    Stupidest Love Poem Ever Written!

    Love...
    Thank you for making me weak, in the moments I needed strength more than anything.
    For being strong rope; Always tying me down. Oh, love... you make the greatet prison.
    Love...
    Would probably be the only reason I'd ever take my own life.
    My love, My love
    You will always have the ability to make me do things that I know I shouldn't.
    Put my heart,
    My mind,
    My body at risk...
    ...All for love.
    Love...
    Is the reason I have grey hairs at only 25 years old.
    Making love...
    ...Is the best way to make...
    Crying,
    Screaming,
    Children.
    Thank you.
    Love...
    So very much.
    Because without you, the poetry forum would be alot more interesting.
    But really, who needs another interest, when you can have..
    Love.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Stupidest Love Poem Ever Written!

    with your talent and superior writing skills, i find it self defacing for you to call your poem "stupid." I like this one for its simplicity, yet complexities while being so simple. think about it, it makes sense with a little insight.
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    Re: Stupidest Love Poem Ever Written!

    Very humurous, and sometimes, very true. I like how you did that entire poem. I found the flow to be well done, and I envy your talent. I agree that calling this the stupidest love poem ever, is degrading to the talent put in it. Great Write.

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    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Stupidest Love Poem Ever Written!

    Thank you both, but I hardly consider this to be superior. Its postworthy at best. Just my sarcastic rant that bordem produced.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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