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    The Suffering

    **This poem is just me releasing a lot of the negative energy that's been bundled up inside of me lately. I figure this and "Shadows Close Behind" are my first step toward releasing the negative in exchange for good chi in order to be one with myself and the Universe. I hope you enjoy! ^_^**



    I want you to suffer as I have suffered.
    To feel the pain of loss and regret.
    I want you to know that with every breath
    I take, every time I step forward, it puts
    me one step closer to destroying all
    that is dear to you.


    You must cry as I have. You must
    follow suit. Karma: The energy you
    put forth is the energy you recieve.
    You chose the wrong friend to make an enemy.
    So prepare yourself for months of tears,
    ghosts of the past and unyeilding pain.


    Even if I don't obtain what I've worked hard
    to reclaim. I will still be around to make sure
    you cannot be truly happy. After all, when the
    tables were turned, you did a damn good job
    of doing that yourself. You destroyed my life!


    I hope you die a slow, lonely and painful death.
    Just the idea of watching you slowly dissapear
    from this plane of existence makes my day seem
    so much brighter. You are nothing more than a devil.


    A shadowy figure of destruction that knows only
    negativity and sorrow; violence and depression.
    Where are your goals? Your dreams? Your priorities?
    Oh. I forgot that evil people aren't capable of that.


    With that said, just leave. Fade away into the fog,
    to be forgotten and forsaken. Leave knowing that,
    although you'll feel slighted, all wrongs will be righted.
    Walk away knowing that what was yours really wasn't yours
    to begin with. Go... And never return.


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    Re: The Suffering

    *tears up* now i know how he feels... *cries* oh umm. sorry.. sorry.. I just that just.. never mind.

    It was really good and you can feel the emotion though out the poem. You did a fantastic job and even though i don't like the idea of you feeling this way... i'd love to see more from you.

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    Re: The Suffering

    The first paragraph feels familiar to me... I ever felt that way before but I'm not serious about it- maybe it's because I just want them to know how I feel... *sigh*... Feels like this teenager life is going to burst when I read this poem. lol And I think you express yourself well enough *nod nod*. Good job there *smile* ... -PEACE!-
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Wow, a really great poem indeed. I enjoyed reading it. *Thumbs up*

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    Re: The Suffering

    Wowzers! I didn't think I'd get such good replies. ^_^ Thank you all for your comments! I wasn't sure that anyone would like this. I appreciate it.


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    Re: The Suffering

    @.@ my... this is awesome... the best from you... i guess kinda long though but still nicely done keep up the good work ^^ *throws a rose*

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