I don't tghink you understand
the pain you caused me
i cried at night
becuase i didn't know you,
not on thing...
to gorgive is one thing
but to forget?
Never forget your past
because your past guides your future
And my future without you
dims, with a flicker of
That one day i will surpass my thoughts of
and i will be able to breathe again
I understand that poem fully. It was a nice, small chain of thoughts, but in poem form. A bit more decripion, or metaphors could make his tiny poem nice, like the heart of the person I know that wrote it. Take care, fellow Rose.
thank you for your words^^ next time i will do better :smile:
Originally Posted by Shade/K' Heart
I thought it was pretty good i was never really good at wiriting poems maybe i should try again anyways it really stood out for me as i could really understand it.