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    Suffering

    I don't tghink you understand
    the pain you caused me

    i cried at night
    becuase i didn't know you,
    not on thing...
    to gorgive is one thing
    but to forget?

    never.

    Never forget your past
    because your past guides your future

    And my future without you
    dims, with a flicker of
    hope.

    That one day i will surpass my thoughts of
    you
    and i will be able to breathe again
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    Re: Suffering

    I understand that poem fully. It was a nice, small chain of thoughts, but in poem form. A bit more decripion, or metaphors could make his tiny poem nice, like the heart of the person I know that wrote it. Take care, fellow Rose.

    -White Rose-

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Suffering

    Quote Originally Posted by Shade/K' Heart View Post
    I understand that poem fully. It was a nice, small chain of thoughts, but in poem form. A bit more decripion, or metaphors could make his tiny poem nice, like the heart of the person I know that wrote it. Take care, fellow Rose.

    -White Rose-
    thank you for your words^^ next time i will do better
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    Re: Suffering

    I thought it was pretty good i was never really good at wiriting poems maybe i should try again anyways it really stood out for me as i could really understand it.

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