suffering of love

!full blooded virgen 666 · Apr 17, 2007, 01:26 PM

the hope of love is fadeing in to the dark abyss the light that once shined im me now fades the birning that once was there is gone down in to the bolded anger and hate that lays in my sole wateing to be relased in to the world wating to explode wondering in the darkness feeling led on but going no ware but down feeling so sad so hopeless dieing in side the many masks i put on the out side is different from the ones that are locked up and wanting to be free afrade to let go wondering in thought wondering y i dont end it but i live on with this pain beacuse i know there a better life out there for me

this is one i just wrote dont laugh plz i klnow it sucks!

KuwiRules145 · Apr 17, 2007, 01:38 PM

That sound awesome and a bit sad. I use to live that same pain a long time ago.

*RayMe* · Apr 17, 2007, 01:51 PM

Hmm nice title u picked

But i think you should write it in verse.. easier to read by that way.. ^^

good poem.. hope to see more of yours.. ^^

Apr 17, 2007, 01:26 PM	#1 (permalink)
!full blooded virgen 666 Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 33 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 395	suffering of love the hope of love is fadeing in to the dark abyss the light that once shined im me now fades the birning that once was there is gone down in to the bolded anger and hate that lays in my sole wateing to be relased in to the world wating to explode wondering in the darkness feeling led on but going no ware but down feeling so sad so hopeless dieing in side the many masks i put on the out side is different from the ones that are locked up and wanting to be free afrade to let go wondering in thought wondering y i dont end it but i live on with this pain beacuse i know there a better life out there for me this is one i just wrote dont laugh plz i klnow it sucks!
Status: Offline

Apr 17, 2007, 01:38 PM	#2 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: suffering of love That sound awesome and a bit sad. I use to live that same pain a long time ago. __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
Status: Offline

Apr 17, 2007, 01:51 PM	#3 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: suffering of love Hmm nice title u picked But i think you should write it in verse.. easier to read by that way.. ^^ good poem.. hope to see more of yours.. ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
Status: Offline

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

Similar Threads
Thread	Thread Starter	Forum	Replies	Last Post
Suffering	Sazzy	Debate and Discuss	24	Dec 08, 2006 10:32 AM
A Suffering Prisoner	HieisLove	Poems	12	Jul 11, 2006 05:31 PM
" My Suffering " A tribute to DNA: Dark	viper11025	Poems	3	Apr 06, 2006 01:54 PM
Love	kedar	The Vault	69	Jan 13, 2006 07:26 AM
The Suffering....movie?	narrator	The Vault	7	Sep 17, 2005 12:26 PM

Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community!	Anime Online Rulez!