A Suffering Prisoner

Where am I heading now?
Death maybe my only path
Never again do I want to feel this way

I can't; this is too much
Rather or not I say stop
Why is this happening to me?
Why am I the only who has to take this suffering?
Does anyone care?

Please set me free
I'm begging on my knees
The chains seemed to have tightened
Looks like I'm a slave for a life time

The darkness seemed to hold me in a cold embrace
There is only the smallest peek of light
I'm too trapped to reach out
Nothing seems abled to break through these barriers

Is my hope gone?!
Why can't I stop these tears from falling?
Why I ask
Help is what I plead

WOW thats sooo deep and depresing
I like it keep up the good work
hope to read more

Whoa I really like this!:) Well done its a real good poem!

Thanks. I'm hoping to get more comments

I hope you didn't really mean that, but I still Love it.:)

This gives me an idea.
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Ugh cliche! It's a good poem, quite well written but it's so mainstream! Very vivid desriptions, gives the reader a feeling of darkness and insecurity but try and break out of the same "i hate life" mold next time. Good vocabulary, a few errors that I'm too lazy to point out, good emotion. Keep on trying!

a poem that is a product of mind and soul! keep that up.