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Reply With QuoteWOW thats sooo deep and depresing
I like it keep up the good work
hope to read more
Where am I heading now?
Death maybe my only path
Never again do I want to feel this way
I can't; this is too much
Rather or not I say stop
Why is this happening to me?
Why am I the only who has to take this suffering?
Does anyone care?
Please set me free
I'm begging on my knees
The chains seemed to have tightened
Looks like I'm a slave for a life time
The darkness seemed to hold me in a cold embrace
There is only the smallest peek of light
I'm too trapped to reach out
Nothing seems abled to break through these barriers
Is my hope gone?!
Why can't I stop these tears from falling?
Why I ask
Help is what I plead
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
WOW thats sooo deep and depresing
I like it keep up the good work
hope to read more
Whoa I really like this!Well done its a real good poem!
Thanks. I'm hoping to get more comments
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
I hope you didn't really mean that, but I still Love it.
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
This gives me an idea.
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Ugh cliche! It's a good poem, quite well written but it's so mainstream! Very vivid desriptions, gives the reader a feeling of darkness and insecurity but try and break out of the same "i hate life" mold next time. Good vocabulary, a few errors that I'm too lazy to point out, good emotion. Keep on trying!
Writing is life again.
a poem that is a product of mind and soul! keep that up.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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