This is a good poem. And godd what a rigid and difficult rhyme mesure to keep through the whole thing. This is a monster sized poem. I also adore how you used a spider in the context with your heart. Certain creastures just give themselves to interpretation as villians. Sharks, vulture, spiders, and many more are thought of as evil, but your spider is a she and it is creating something complex like your heart. This piece is moving and beautiful, good job.