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    suicide

    my 2nd poem


    my wrists full of scars
    in the shape of six point stars
    the bleeding again it starts
    my blood all over the car

    a uniformed man walks to me
    my wrists he wants to see
    he makes me take off my white tee
    i think hes going to strip search me

    the scars on my legs have
    the suicide hotline number
    in their scars

    but i cant call now because
    im behind padded bars

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    Re: suicide

    whoa this poem is sweet not sure
    of the meaning but for me it has
    i have had enough written all over it.

    its sort of sad that some people
    get so drastic but with no one there
    for them its all they have left , but thats
    just one of many ways to take this poem.

    im sure there is another way to look at this
    but thats the meaning i get from it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: suicide

    umm ok... that was weird good poem but weird thingy, oh well good luck with your next one. Hope you cheer up next time you right a poem heh...nah only jokin nice poem and great subject, kinda

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    Re: suicide

    weird i didnt think they arrest you that great poem though.

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    Re: suicide

    cool poem love it its like death itself did that to you amazing love to see more

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    Re: suicide

    weird i didnt think they arrest you that great poem though.
    yes not normal cops but insane isilam cops ((did not spell right srry))
    and i have tryed the # they just piss me off more
    this is really nice i like it alot
    not sure
    of the meaning
    well its about a cutter duh and he/she (idk) whent to far and got put in insane isilam.. and well the star is the star of daved dont get that part but the # in the legs is proboly so he/she would not forget it
    love it
    and we are all in love with death and death loves us

    cant wait to see more
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: suicide

    Great poem!!!!! Really!!! I like it cause it's like death in a way as you can say! Great job! I hope to see more!!!!
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