"suicide "

The lives of many
Fall to one,
Many lives end to a gun
Death comes so soon.

The ringing boom,
Just one bullet to consume,
And yet I seem to live my life.

The then there's the knife,
It'll give a good old slice,
But I can't let myself loose.

A precious noose,
But I seem to resist my pain,
Instead I go insane.
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I love this. The word play, and how you did the rhyming. (I'd tell you how gifted you are but I bet you already know)
So... have you published anything yet? ^^