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    "suicide "

    The lives of many
    Fall to one,
    Many lives end to a gun
    Death comes so soon.

    The ringing boom,
    Just one bullet to consume,
    And yet I seem to live my life.

    The then there's the knife,
    It'll give a good old slice,
    But I can't let myself loose.

    A precious noose,
    But I seem to resist my pain,
    Instead I go insane.

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    Re: "suicide "

    I love this. The word play, and how you did the rhyming. (I'd tell you how gifted you are but I bet you already know)
    So... have you published anything yet? ^^
    ... Not Ever Again...

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