Suicide of a gurl that wants love

The silence of my crys
As the pain
Get to hard to bare
I go depper........
And depper
It starts to bleed
As the blood come crashing down
Like a waterfall
As it flows like river
I only think of you
As I can feel the coldness comeing
As I think how you....
How you left me alone
Alone to die
Alone to suffer
I tryed to stop loving you
But I cant
The day you left
You sould have killed me
But it is to late
You were my world
You gave me hope
When there was no hope
You pulled me frome the darknees into the lite
But when you left
The darknees came back
No way to get out and
And no hope.........
No hope of you ever coming back
You said you loved me
And i loved you back
But does that mean any thing to you
Or are you just like every guy i have meat
That just plays with gurls hearts
My heart is broken forever
No way to be fixed
No way to be hole again
My life has just been one big mistack
Love has no place in my heart
My heart only has searched for love
And only found pain
Now there is a puddel of blood
Around me
I have no thoght left
I wach over my boby
As it layes there moshonless
As there is no color
As i see tears on my cheacks
Now my heart will belong to no one
The days go bye and no one miss the
Gurl who only wanted to love

How sad really! Ir seem so painful but I liked it! You have a spelling mistake but it was still good anyway! Hope to see more! :D:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2.../EvenJesus.jpg

well ya me is a bad speller .... oh nice on the last comment
still cant see how
jesus care when If he was reall
he would not care any way
so ya
thats right i dont belive in him god or any thinf ealse

i like it,

i would also usualy write like that but your's different...had a few mistakes but i think you've noticed ^0^